A Bit of Advice
At a party, when you see a twinkle
in the eyes of a beautiful girl you like
and her lips twitch,
you might feel like a teenager going out on a first date,
Then, I suggest you
be much more careful than before
as it is not a blind date
coz over her shoulder you might see
another pair of stars as if they are twinkling in the dark
and they might be slanted eyes of a tiger
so you might turn to a bright spark
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