A Bit Longer

Some mornings i wake up with the weight once again,
the whisper that says leave
It presses behind my ribs,
Soft as fog, heavy as oceans

A lovers smile breaks through the grey,
Gentle, unassuming,
A promise i didn't know i needed
I suppose i can stay a bit longer

Then i hear the children's laughter,
Contagious and wild and free,
Spinning through the house like music
I don't want to turn it off yet
I find myself leaning in and listening for another note
Another verse of small, living joy

The phone rings, friendship at the other end
It holds the chill at bay and offers me a light i can rest beneath
It doesn't ask me to rise,
Just to breathe, in and out,
Stay and bask in the warmth a little longer

So i do
And in these borrowed moments I find something like grace
Not the absence of my pain,
But the quiet decision to stay a bit longer
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Kendrick Avatar
November 17, 2025 at 3:05 AM
Sometimes a marriage is like that when trouble arises. If we stay, with the exception of abuse of any kind, all of it will work out and you will be glad you did stay. I really enjoyed reading this one. Creative work. Way to go. Sara K
Hollander Avatar
November 16, 2025 at 2:54 PM
This is beautiful! I like it
De Beaulieu Avatar
November 16, 2025 at 10:26 AM
Hello Allison Gates, i think the person wanted to stay. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/
Agustin Avatar
November 1, 2025 at 3:06 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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