Line Gauthier Poet Kimo

A Bit Like a Snowglobe

walking noisily crunching underfoot
autumnal free fall of leaves
sensations swished around



AP: Honorable Mention 2022

Submitted on November 2, 2017 for contest EARLY NOVEMBER PREMIERE sponsored by BRIAN STRAND  -  RANKED 2ND

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Sandra Haight November 6, 2017 at 4:26 PM Wonderful imagery, Line! Congratulations on your nice placement in the contest. Sandra Line Gauthier November 6, 2017 at 5:10 PM Thanks, Sandra. I always appreciate your visit. Have a great evening.

Suzanne Delaney November 5, 2017 at 6:39 PM CONGRATULATIONS, LINE: SNOWGLOBES ARE A FAVORITE OF MINE. Alone in your own world of falling leaves. Well Done. SuZ Line Gauthier November 5, 2017 at 7:28 PM Thanks for your visit, Suzanne. Have an awesome week!

Eve Roper November 3, 2017 at 7:17 PM Nicely done, Line :-) good luck in the contest. Line Gauthier November 3, 2017 at 7:49 PM Thanks, Eve.

Kim Rodrigues November 3, 2017 at 9:04 AM A great write! Can hear the swish! Line Gauthier November 3, 2017 at 10:09 AM Thanks, Kim. Dedicated to all those snowglobe collectors out there.