Notes About The Poem

Sometimes, events organised by friends or family don't work out for you. Never mind, just smile. They have the best of intentions.

A Birthday Party

A Birthday Party

				Today's my birthday and
				There's a party and a band.
				It's such a jolly time
				Except I don't feel I'm
				Ready for fun and games
				And learning people's names.

				I'm being pressed to eat
				Things savoury and sweet.
				There's trifle down my frock,
				This evening's such a shock.
				I'm just not in the mood
				To contemplate this food.

				I s'pose that they mean well
				And I must never tell
				How I really feel,
				Be grateful for the meal.
				Oh look, a glass of wine!
				Now that will do just fine.
				Another one or three,
				That always works for me,
				It'll blur the jolly scene
				And make me feel quite mean.

				The music's much too loud,
				I don't know half this crowd,
				That man and microphone
				Should have stayed at home.
				But I'll put on a show
				And then they'll let me go.
				A tear, a sob and more,
				Remember Lesley Gore:

				It's my Party
				     and I'll cry if I want to,
					Cry if I want to,
					         Cry if I want to,
						   ...................
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Bateman Avatar
August 29, 2016 at 7:32 AM
Hello Elisabeth!! Very well-done. The refrain from Lesley Gore is legendary. All the best. Cheers, Gary
Sheaffer Avatar
August 31, 2016 at 11:39 AM
Thanks Gary. Much appreciated comments.
Beak Avatar
August 28, 2016 at 7:54 PM
Alas, have I seen times like this one ,, so blue like the best and worst feeling
Sheaffer Avatar
August 31, 2016 at 11:42 AM
It's always nice when people care enough about you to make plans but they don't always get it right. Never mind. It's the thought that counts.
Arnone Avatar
August 28, 2016 at 7:52 PM
I like your writing style, Elisabeth. Good rhythm and rhyme in humorous time. :-)
Sheaffer Avatar
August 31, 2016 at 11:43 AM
Thanks for your kind comments Tom.
Boles Avatar
August 28, 2016 at 5:26 PM
very nicely done
Sheaffer Avatar
August 31, 2016 at 11:43 AM
Thanks, Alan.
Turner Avatar
August 27, 2016 at 4:16 PM
This is a very entertaining and truthful write. Caught myself smiling at the glass(or two or three) of wine. If it is your birthday. HAPPY BIRTHDAY! Sorry no wine! really enjoyed reading this one.
Sheaffer Avatar
August 31, 2016 at 11:46 AM
It's nice when people care enough to make a celebration so keep smiling.
Fleming Avatar
August 27, 2016 at 1:01 PM
Very nicely constructed, Elisabeth. For me you have summed up what those intrusive, annoying parties are all about! Blah!! :) Please accept my best regards, Elisabeth. :) john A much merited seven!
Sheaffer Avatar
August 31, 2016 at 11:47 AM
Thanks, John.
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