A Bird's Song

A Bird's Song

A flippant man would declare and thus could not believe
How the bluebirds sang in the lush garden of green sound
And unto his daring vain ears as he heard the voice of Eve
He then added a word of his own on a greater over sound.

Her melodic tone as she speaks without an inferior of words
She admittedly has an eloquence of voice so pleasantly soft
Her melodious voice has a great influence on all Gods birds
When off in the distance a squeal of laughter carried it aloft.

Then destiny would have it as she had heard the caroling song
Quite later their voices had came so close to which all would cross
For the music persisted in the green lavish of wooded fields so long
As in that moment of truth, it may never initially late and lost.

Then after there the songbirds song would not sound the same
As Eve walked to the woods, all the beauty of birds are why she came.

Written: Nov. 14, 2014

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 7/10/2016 3:40:00 AM
Good to see... Elizabeth, skat
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Elizabeth Larter
Date: 7/10/2016 3:09:00 PM
Thank you so very much Skat for commenting on my poem...
Date: 7/9/2016 1:03:00 PM
Welcome to our poetic family dear, Elizabeth, where you may meet a lot of good people! Your poem a real song is that its melodic tune touches the heart!
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Elizabeth Larter
Date: 7/10/2016 3:08:00 PM
Thank you so very much Demetrios for your beauty of a comment on my penned poem.. Elizabeth
Date: 7/9/2016 11:59:00 AM
Elizabeth, great post. Linda
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Date: 7/10/2016 3:07:00 PM
Thank you so very much Linda on your great comment on this poem of mine.
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