A Bird's Freedom

A bird flys by                                 Free as the wind
  Leaving behind                       Healing scars
             A lingering             Past behind
                     Feather.      A new life.
                            Begining
                                ....

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 7/2/2009 6:36:00 PM
beautiful! jim
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Date: 3/25/2009 2:32:00 PM
....Love always to You and Yours Loves, John:):)~SMile....
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Date: 3/25/2009 2:18:00 PM
....to shed the not so pleasnat nonents of ous past, forever leave them behind!? That is, if we so shoose to do? For witin truth and in in part, to some degee, we are, the makers of our own fates....its all calles perspectives and points of view~mingles with efforts, breaking of boundingd, and new dreames! An old verse from an old song, "You only get what you give!? So, fly high Beautiful Catherine~and don't ever look back, as much as possible as possiby dear lady!!?....cont....
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Date: 3/25/2009 1:51:00 PM
Smile~Ah, to be as an Eagle, to soar away form the unpleasanties of a moments perch~unto a new day and unto new place, where peace of heart may forever be found! New beginnings amid new suroundingss; where bright is the future of better things to come!? But who is to say, that we cannot be as those Eagles, within our minds, bodies and souls!? We may not have wings; but we do have abilities and dreams! And yes, for many the fortunate, we do have the opportunity....cont
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Date: 3/25/2009 6:22:00 AM
Beautiful in both content and presentation. Well done! Love, Shar
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Date: 3/24/2009 6:52:00 PM
Very powerful write.. Creatively crafted...and shaped just like a bird...Beautiful presentation here. If only we were like birds...Just take off when things look bad and hopeless...leaving behind only a picture that once resembled us..That would really be a sight to see. Free to live anywhere our wings would take us. Great writing~GB, Tyesha
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