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A Bird With Broken Wings

I was flying innocent in my open sky A storm from nowhere tore me down No one ever cared for the injured bird Hiding in me clasping the broken mind In the collapsed wings painfully curled Forgot how to fly free in the wild wind. Pleas in shame sent out in meek voice Reached nowhere found no other ear Retracted unheard and hung unwanted. Feeble appeals making no great waves Touched no one and entered no heart Subsided unfelt and faded unresponded. The lone bird cries within without care I can’t shed the flowing hidden tears. I was lashed by the storm of dark desire Mute feelings of young emotion mutilated The unsullied sky was broken by the invader Now forcing me to get lost in the wreckage. What of me in the end you would remember : A bird with broken wings in the ruins of its sky. March 4, 2018.

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Date: 3/7/2018 9:44:00 PM
Congratulations on your win :~) enjoyed reading! Hugs Eve ~`*
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 3/8/2018 3:26:00 AM
Thank you, Eve for your appreciation.
Date: 3/5/2018 6:50:00 AM
a bird with broken wings, how sad is that...beautifully expressed and sad sweet Subimal. thank you and congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 3/8/2018 3:26:00 AM
Thank you, Laura for your nice comments.
Date: 9/2/2017 10:13:00 PM
Congrats Subimal to win on this wonderul poem
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 9/4/2017 12:22:00 AM
Thank you, Anisha.
Date: 9/2/2017 9:14:00 PM
Exquisite write, Subimal, and such wonderful metaphors ... adore this one! Blessings and congrats, my friend!
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 9/4/2017 12:23:00 AM
Thank you, Greg, so much for appreciating.
Date: 9/2/2017 12:34:00 PM
Congratulations on your win for this excellent poem Subimal ! :)
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 9/4/2017 12:25:00 AM
Thank you, Heidi.

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