A Bird With Broken Wings

I was flying innocent in my open sky
A storm from nowhere tore me down
No one ever cared for the injured bird
Hiding in me clasping the broken mind
In the collapsed wings painfully curled
Forgot how to fly free in the wild wind.

Pleas in shame sent out in meek voice
Reached nowhere found no other ear 
Retracted unheard and hung unwanted.
Feeble appeals making no great waves
Touched no one and entered no heart
Subsided unfelt and faded unresponded.
The  lone bird cries within without care
I can’t shed the flowing hidden tears.

I was lashed by the storm of dark desire
Mute feelings of young emotion mutilated
The unsullied sky was broken by the invader
Now forcing me to get lost in the wreckage.
What of me in the end you would remember :
A bird with broken wings in the ruins of its sky.

March 4, 2018.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Roper Avatar
March 7, 2018 at 9:44 PM
Congratulations on your win :~) enjoyed reading! Hugs Eve ~`*
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March 8, 2018 at 3:26 AM
Thank you, Eve for your appreciation.
Scars Avatar
March 5, 2018 at 6:50 AM
a bird with broken wings, how sad is that...beautifully expressed and sad sweet Subimal. thank you and congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
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March 8, 2018 at 3:26 AM
Thank you, Laura for your nice comments.
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September 2, 2017 at 10:13 PM
Congrats Subimal to win on this wonderul poem
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September 4, 2017 at 12:22 AM
Thank you, Anisha.
Barden Avatar
September 2, 2017 at 9:14 PM
Exquisite write, Subimal, and such wonderful metaphors ... adore this one! Blessings and congrats, my friend!
Sinha-Roy Avatar
September 4, 2017 at 12:23 AM
Thank you, Greg, so much for appreciating.
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September 2, 2017 at 12:34 PM
Congratulations on your win for this excellent poem Subimal ! :)
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September 4, 2017 at 12:25 AM
Thank you, Heidi.
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