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A Bird

his showtime is near dancing to the end of love... preening his plumage March 15, 2022 howmanysyllables.com

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Line Gauthier

Date: 4/4/2022 8:47:00 PM

lovely poem< Margarita ~

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/30/2022 6:39:00 AM

He definitely is a bird possibly a rooster. Congrats on this winner. Way to go. Sara

Eve Roper

Date: 3/28/2022 9:34:00 PM

Great imagery, Margarita , congratulations on your win on Tania Kitchin's Bird Haiku contest.

Margarita Lillico
Date: 3/29/2022 8:12:00 AM

Thank you, Eve.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/28/2022 9:18:00 PM

i love your entry. Creative work. Congrats on the win.

Margarita Lillico
Date: 3/29/2022 8:13:00 AM

Thank you, I think that my bird is missing the name:) M.

Christuraj Alex

Date: 3/27/2022 9:21:00 PM

"dancing to the end of love" - Beautiful. Congratulations!

Margarita Lillico
Date: 3/29/2022 8:13:00 AM

Thank you.

Tania Kitchin

Date: 3/27/2022 4:51:00 PM

Margarita, congratulations on your winning placement, nice imagery!

Margarita Lillico
Date: 3/29/2022 8:14:00 AM

Thank you for the inspiration:) M.

Valsa George

Date: 3/21/2022 7:17:00 AM

It is fun watching a bird getting ready for his show time strutting his feathers. A lovely haiku, Margarita !

Margarita Lillico
Date: 3/29/2022 8:14:00 AM

Thank you. M.

James Marshall Goff

Date: 3/16/2022 11:59:00 AM

This is lovely Margarita!

Margarita Lillico
Date: 3/17/2022 8:27:00 AM

Thank you, James. M.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/15/2022 8:12:00 PM

For dance, he must…show off! :)

Margarita Lillico
Date: 3/17/2022 8:26:00 AM

Poor him, got to work hard:)

John Lawless

Date: 3/15/2022 2:25:00 PM

...so easily fooled by some flashy feathers... nicely done Margarita...methinks it may fly to the top....

Margarita Lillico
Date: 3/15/2022 4:07:00 PM

Ha! It aims to get there:) Thanks, M.

Rico Leffanta

Date: 3/15/2022 11:34:00 AM

Enjoyed! What I find amusing in nature is how picky females are not impressed by show-off males . . . .Aloha!

Margarita Lillico
Date: 3/15/2022 12:27:00 PM

Impressed but not for long, as long as it takes:) Aloha!

Jan Allison

Date: 3/15/2022 8:28:00 AM

delightful imagery Margarita:-) hugs Jan xx

Margarita Lillico
Date: 3/15/2022 10:34:00 AM

:) XX M