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A Bird

his showtime is near
dancing to the end of love...
preening his plumage

March 15, 2022
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Line Gauthier

April 4, 2022 at 8:47 PM

lovely poem< Margarita ~

Sara Kendrick

March 30, 2022 at 6:39 AM

He definitely is a bird possibly a rooster. Congrats on this winner. Way to go. Sara

Eve Roper

March 28, 2022 at 9:34 PM

Great imagery, Margarita , congratulations on your win on Tania Kitchin's Bird Haiku contest.

Margarita Lillico

March 29, 2022 at 8:12 AM

Thank you, Eve.

Andrea Dietrich

March 28, 2022 at 9:18 PM

i love your entry. Creative work. Congrats on the win.

Margarita Lillico

March 29, 2022 at 8:13 AM

Thank you, I think that my bird is missing the name:) M.

Christuraj Alex

March 27, 2022 at 9:21 PM

"dancing to the end of love" - Beautiful. Congratulations!

Margarita Lillico

March 29, 2022 at 8:13 AM

Thank you.

Tania Kitchin

March 27, 2022 at 4:51 PM

Margarita, congratulations on your winning placement, nice imagery!

Margarita Lillico

March 29, 2022 at 8:14 AM

Thank you for the inspiration:) M.

Valsa George

March 21, 2022 at 7:17 AM

It is fun watching a bird getting ready for his show time strutting his feathers. A lovely haiku, Margarita !

Margarita Lillico

March 29, 2022 at 8:14 AM

Thank you. M.

James Marshall Goff

March 16, 2022 at 11:59 AM

This is lovely Margarita!

Margarita Lillico

March 17, 2022 at 8:27 AM

Thank you, James. M.

Kim Rodrigues

March 15, 2022 at 8:12 PM

For dance, he must…show off! :)

Margarita Lillico

March 17, 2022 at 8:26 AM

Poor him, got to work hard:)

John Lawless

March 15, 2022 at 2:25 PM

...so easily fooled by some flashy feathers... nicely done Margarita...methinks it may fly to the top....

Margarita Lillico

March 15, 2022 at 4:07 PM

Ha! It aims to get there:) Thanks, M.

Rico Leffanta

March 15, 2022 at 11:34 AM

Enjoyed! What I find amusing in nature is how picky females are not impressed by show-off males . . . .Aloha!

Margarita Lillico

March 15, 2022 at 12:27 PM

Impressed but not for long, as long as it takes:) Aloha!

Jan Allison

March 15, 2022 at 8:28 AM

delightful imagery Margarita:-) hugs Jan xx

Margarita Lillico

March 15, 2022 at 10:34 AM

:) XX M

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