This is the example for my Poetry Contest called "Intensity" -
A Billion Ponds ---------------- I came to the land of a billion ponds where they said there would be (one day) a million more. A billion ponds shimmered in sunsets; lined up purposefully for my delight. A billion birds or more perished on these ponds and they made twilight unbearable for me, these billion birds on the trillion million ponds. So I went away from ponds - all of them - far from the million, or was it a trillion - the numbers in my head... I went away from them and all the birds but tweet of them on Twitter to the millions, (who forget). ---------------------------------------------------------------------- 3/17/2019
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