A Big Trip

Hope
                                     Cheery, Bright
                          Smiling, Achieving, Thriving
                   Happiness, Joy, Darkness, Depression
                       Dejection, Stagnation, Crashing
                                     Hollow, Void
                                        Hopeless




				                                            Sunshine Williams
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Nunez Avatar
July 23, 2015 at 10:05 AM
Not a form I am familiar with, but I like the progression and then regression. Deep. How are you, Jill? Hope you're keeping well. Kim :-)
Spagnola Avatar
July 23, 2015 at 11:18 AM
I am well Kim, thank you...thank God I am not to the hopeless, :), jill
Jones Avatar
July 23, 2015 at 9:24 AM
The path between the two existances can be direct and it is perfectly expressed here. Kind regards, Ian
Spagnola Avatar
July 23, 2015 at 11:21 AM
Thank you for the read & kind comments Ian. Yes, the polar opposites can be direct...swift as well. thank God we can catch ourselves prior to the end of the spectrum :), jill
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