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A Big Trip

Hope Cheery, Bright Smiling, Achieving, Thriving Happiness, Joy, Darkness, Depression Dejection, Stagnation, Crashing Hollow, Void Hopeless Sunshine Williams

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Kp Nunez

Date: 7/23/2015 10:05:00 AM

Not a form I am familiar with, but I like the progression and then regression. Deep. How are you, Jill? Hope you're keeping well. Kim :-)

Jill Spagnola
Date: 7/23/2015 11:18:00 AM

I am well Kim, thank you...thank God I am not to the hopeless, :), jill

Ian Jones

Date: 7/23/2015 9:24:00 AM

The path between the two existances can be direct and it is perfectly expressed here. Kind regards, Ian

Jill Spagnola
Date: 7/23/2015 11:21:00 AM

Thank you for the read & kind comments Ian. Yes, the polar opposites can be direct...swift as well. thank God we can catch ourselves prior to the end of the spectrum :), jill