A Big Problem

There once was a man named Mahamed.
Who's ego was too big for his head.
When he went to the store. 
Could not come back for more.
Till his pompousness he'd try to shed.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Dietrich Avatar
April 9, 2014 at 5:32 PM
I finally am seeing this one. I hope I have seen all your limericks now. I like the one better you put into my contest, but I enjoyed the image of this guy whose ego is bigger than his head!!
Buhain-Baello Avatar
March 25, 2014 at 9:49 PM
Witty and very well crafted.
A  Avatar
March 18, 2014 at 9:28 PM
ha, good one Robert ~SKAT~
Horne Avatar
March 17, 2014 at 12:19 PM
LOL, had a chuckle here : )
Johnson Avatar
March 18, 2014 at 12:27 PM
Thank you Jaaaack! A little nod to Jack Nicholson. :) This has a little hint of reminding ourselves to keep our ego's in check huh? Peace. :)
Bauer Avatar
March 16, 2014 at 12:59 PM
nice one, robert! i love limericks and this one is a fine example...
Johnson Avatar
March 16, 2014 at 3:45 PM
Thank you ilene. I think I'm getting carried away with these. Peace. :)
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