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A Best Treatment

Early in the Morning, I rushedly wake up, When I heard a loud noise, Someone was at the door. Look at your father, Mum was totally terrified. I ran up with my naked feet, I felt as street was a piece of ice. I jumped up stairs in a breath, And check the heart beat of my dad. Body was cooling down. Hurrily, I jumped to the hospital. Reported at the emergencies. After two hours waiting, Doctor has a normal check up And discharged him immediately, Dad still was complaining A pain was spreading into the belly. I reported to his GP, After five hours waiting, He came to the evening, When he examined to my dad, Straight away he booked a bed, Dad still was complaining Pain was getting worst Nobody came to see him. After four and half hours in a hospital, A nurse came with an injection As long as he pulled out her syringe, Father was died straight away. I got a death report, A reason was mentioning, He has heart attack. It was his first time, He never went to a hospital. Doctor spend other three hours To conclude a reason of death, When his heart was beating, Nobody touched him. I have it, ‘A best treatment of intellects’.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2005




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