A Bellow Made of Stone

I wasn't ready to let go of you, no not yet...
I'll hold your memory I promise , I won't forget...
I swear that I'll pray - every little single day...
I'll always remember you , so pretty , so funny , so honest and kind...
There will never be a replacement for you , your so rare to  find...
I want to be strong but I can't , you know I have a weak heart...
You know that it was crumbling and your death crashed the remaining part...
I keep hearing your screaming sound...
But how can you hear me when your sleeping inside the ground ?
Is it cold - are you scared - do you feel pain ?
I swear whenever I close my eyes I see you and I feel like I'm going insane...
Do you remember when we use to sing Christian's Aguilera  ( hurt ) ?
We use to sing it cause we love it , now I sing it cause I can feel it , my heart has been burnt...
It's not fair that you left too soon...
Why you had to pay the price my shinny moon ?
Do you feel a lone ?
Does it hurts to lay your head down on a bellow made of stone ?
I keep praying for you but I don't know if you can hear...
I asked God to illuminate you from every little fear...
 

Dedicated to my best friend sadeem , rest upon your soul my dear one.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016


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Date: 2/23/2016 8:50:00 PM
this is a heartfelt dedication Dalia, Enjoyed the way you expressed your emotions and fear. Please keep writing. LOVE LINDA
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Dalia Shahein
Date: 2/24/2016 4:44:00 PM
Thank you very much my dear and I'm so glad and honored by your beautiful comment and your delightful visit, hugs / / :)
Date: 1/29/2016 7:33:00 AM
Profound exploratory expression, Dalia. Best wishes in these harshest of times ~MW.
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Dalia Shahein
Date: 1/30/2016 6:39:00 AM
Thank you so much my friend for ur kind words they're much appreciated as much as I'm pleased with your delightful visit, hugs / / :)
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White Sage
Date: 1/29/2016 7:12:00 PM
thanks Michael, losing such good friend is indeed hard to overcome, on her behalf, am sure she'll appreciate this, thanks for the lovely comment
Date: 1/21/2016 11:03:00 PM
Very beautiful poem of love and a wonderful dedication!
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Dalia Shahein
Date: 1/22/2016 1:03:00 AM
Thank you so much my friend for ur lovely comment and ur delightful visit, much appreciated, hugs / / :)
Date: 1/21/2016 9:01:00 PM
in my Life, I have suffered loss....and several times I have been faced with that same cost....it seems that my Journey must continue on....whereas sadeem may be resting upon....The Grace And Glory Of His Holy Essence....because to be outside the body is to Be In His Presence....my condolences for you and yours my friend....;)
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Dalia Shahein
Date: 1/21/2016 9:10:00 PM
I can't even find word's to thank you enough for your supportive , delightful words , they mean so much to me , I really do appreciate your lovely and pleasing visit , hugs / / :)
Date: 1/19/2016 9:05:00 PM
Our hearts only weaken when we refuse the nourishment of the love that is meant for the lips of our souls Dalia...J.A.B.
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Dalia Shahein
Date: 1/20/2016 10:15:00 AM
Thank you dear for ur thoughtful words and ur pleasing visit, much appreciated, hugs / / :)
Date: 1/19/2016 7:59:00 AM
- A painful time for you, dear Dalia - Rest in peace Sadeem ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Dalia Shahein
Date: 1/19/2016 8:12:00 AM
Yes it is , I thank you my dear for ur lovely comment and ur delightful visit , hugs / / :)
Date: 1/19/2016 6:48:00 AM
I pray for her soul a perfect peaceful rest and bliss...heartfelt write Dalia
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Dalia Shahein
Date: 1/19/2016 7:51:00 AM
Thank you so much dear I appreciate it much , hugs / / :)
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