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A Belle Crooning Nature's Glee

I think that I shall never see A poem lovely as a tree— A belle crooning nature’s glee, Splendorous as seasons’ glory. A ballad of resplendent spring In stanzas cherry-blossom pink Uplifting moods of lovers Lost in heart-shaped leaves Fluttering soft lavender breeze Arousing romantic appeal In fuchsia hues of redbud trees. A verse of feisty summer winds Swaying beats of majestic oak Rustling big-leaf maple trees Hosting dance of perky sparrows Choreographing mating tempo-- Magnolia’s white blooms evoke. A lyric of autumn’s aspirations Scripting chorus in blazing colors, Red, orange, purple, yellow, On maple, hickory, birch, sycamore, Strumming strings of alluring refrains-- Rhythms waltzing fervid meadows. A cadent song of winter’s chill Shuddering vibes of barren trees Yet, charmingly pretty as can be When snowflakes gently falling Invoke tunes of season’s greetings Crowning tips of ornamental twigs As hearts’ melodies merrily sing. February 7, 2020 Placed 1st: Famous poetic lines 2 poetry contest Sponsor: Silent One “I think that I shall never see A poem lovely as a tree” by Joyce Kilmer HM: Strand select H contest by Brian Strand

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Date: 10/28/2020 6:40:00 PM
A perfectly painted picture in words, Vijay :)
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Date: 10/5/2020 9:46:00 AM
Ah, you sing the song of success here Vijay, I think when the judging comes around, it will be pay day for you, Love it.
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Date: 3/21/2020 9:08:00 AM
Beautiful my friend, Vijay: You could be describing our meadow. What a beautiful picture you paint in words. Best, SuZ.
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Date: 2/26/2020 4:17:00 PM
Full of such beautiful imagery, this is an amazing work of poetic art! Congratulations on your top of the class win - so well-deserved, my friend! Bravo! Hugs. Pandita
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Date: 2/22/2020 9:50:00 PM
And this is supposed to be about sight, but I hear the most beautiful song, Vijay! This is amazing. Love it ~ Congrats on this fave of mine ;)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/23/2020 7:48:00 AM
Always a pleasure to read your comments my friend--glad you liked this poem. Much appreciate, as always--many thanks, HT. And a special thank you for the FAVE.
Date: 2/20/2020 10:04:00 AM
Stopping by this time with Congratulations my friend, a truly deserved win. Blessings, Jennifer.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/20/2020 4:28:00 PM
Thanks for the return visit, Jennifer--much appreciate.
Date: 2/17/2020 12:53:00 PM
Congrats on your well deserved win. I forgot to enter mine and Brian gave it only hm.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/18/2020 7:04:00 AM
Yes--I know you missed the deadline--it is a winner as I recall. Much appreciate, Andrea--many thanks.
Date: 2/16/2020 1:54:00 PM
Vijay your words are a symphony of nature. Beautifully written! You are truly a talented poet!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/17/2020 7:20:00 AM
Thank you Wren--much appreciate.
Date: 2/15/2020 2:53:00 PM
This is beautiful, Vijay; you transmit so much emotion ... I'm lost for words; this definitely goes to my favs! Regards // paul
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/16/2020 7:43:00 AM
Thank you Paul--much appreciate the kind remarks. Regards.
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Paul Callus
Date: 2/15/2020 2:54:00 PM
...and congratulations on placing first; indeed a very worthy top winner.
Date: 2/13/2020 1:21:00 PM
Wow, this is amazing, Vijay, Congratulations on your win!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/13/2020 4:15:00 PM
Thank you--much appreciate, MLK.
Date: 2/12/2020 6:40:00 PM
Melody of the seasons, Very nicely penned Vijay, Congrats on the win
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/13/2020 6:50:00 AM
Thank you Joseph--much appreciate.
Date: 2/12/2020 1:44:00 PM
Excellent write and the win says more!! Congrats!!!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/12/2020 4:04:00 PM
Thank you Krish--much appreciate.
Date: 2/12/2020 9:41:00 AM
A beautiful celebration of all seasons, vividly descriptive, Vijay. Janice
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/12/2020 10:44:00 AM
Much appreciate Janice--many thanks.
Date: 2/11/2020 8:17:00 AM
An apotheosis of nature's beauty through poetry's magic symphony dearest friend, Vijay!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/11/2020 11:40:00 AM
Thank you my friend--much appreciate, Demetrios.
Date: 2/10/2020 3:59:00 PM
Back with congratulations. Thank your for congratulations on POTD. Hugs Eve
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/11/2020 11:39:00 AM
Much appreciate Eve--many thanks.
Date: 2/10/2020 3:35:00 PM
Exceptional verses and wonderful display my friend. Congratulations on your win. God bless..
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/11/2020 11:39:00 AM
Thank you Robert--much appreciate.
Date: 2/10/2020 8:31:00 AM
Hi Vijay,you are so incredible - your imagination is so intense and your true poetic craftsmanship always works miracles and magic with your poems. I salute you and your awesome talent. Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/10/2020 11:41:00 AM
Much appreciate Jennifer, your kind remarks--always a pleasure. Many thanks.
Date: 2/9/2020 4:23:00 PM
Your poem is packed with incredible imagery and action, Vijay. And I love the meter too. I see congratulations are in order. So glad you received a first place! Hugs, Carolyn
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/9/2020 7:14:00 PM
Thank you my friend for your kind remarks--much appreciate, as always.
Date: 2/9/2020 4:16:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. What a beautiful walk through the seasons. Come on Spring with its beauty. Have a good day.............
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/9/2020 7:14:00 PM
Much appreciate Paula--many thanks.
Date: 2/9/2020 3:09:00 PM
WoW! Vijay, The picture that you created with words is breath taking! Congratulations on your 1st place win. It was well deserved. PS, I appreciate your continued support. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/9/2020 3:24:00 PM
Much appreciate the kind remarks, Alexis--many thanks.
Date: 2/9/2020 2:21:00 PM
Beautiful piece here. Congratulations
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/9/2020 3:24:00 PM
Thank you Mark--much appreciate.
Date: 2/9/2020 2:02:00 PM
Very deserving congratulations on your lovely first place win Vijay! I knew this poem would score high! : ) xxoo
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Date: 2/9/2020 3:23:00 PM
Much appreciate your return visit, Connie--many thanks.
Date: 2/9/2020 12:09:00 PM
- Back with a well deserved congratulations, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/9/2020 3:23:00 PM
Thank you for the return visit--much appreciate, Anne-Lise.
Date: 2/9/2020 9:31:00 AM
Congratulations dear Vijay on your top podium win! This is such a beautiful, exceptional piece with awesome vivid imagery! Well done! Pandita
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/9/2020 3:22:00 PM
Much appreciate--thank you, Pandita.
Date: 2/9/2020 6:52:00 AM
I told you this one was excellent and a winner. Congrats on your top win Vijay :) hugs
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/9/2020 7:38:00 AM
Indeed you did. Much appreciate--many thanks, Sandy.
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