A Beguiling Cat

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1/14/2025 for Alphabet Soup Poetry Contest sponsored by Joseph May

A beguiling cat does everything for gain. His innocently jaded, kindly, loving, mein - not only prevarication, quietly raising station, trotting up, vexingly, while xeriscaping your zone.

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Joseph May

Date: 2/3/2025 5:58:00 AM

Congrats on your win, Very nicely done

David Crandall
Date: 2/3/2025 9:51:00 AM

Thanks Joseph. I was fun - quite a challenge to think of words which have to start with a certain letter.

thriveni c mysore

Date: 2/2/2025 10:47:00 PM

Lo!! congratulations on your win dear poet. I can imagine a charming cat trotting,Cheers!!!

David Crandall
Date: 2/3/2025 9:51:00 AM

Thanks Thriveni!

thriveni c mysore

Date: 1/20/2025 12:36:00 AM

Oh boy! lovely write. didn't know xeriscaping! Best wishes dear poet.

David Crandall
Date: 1/20/2025 8:40:00 AM

Thanks Thriveni. I might've taken a wrong turn with this one, as I tried to make it rhyme and be a sensible story, but it started to fall apart a bit toward the end. Xeriscaping is very important here in California. We should be using native plants that thrive in our dry climate, but instead, people like their thirsty lawns.