A Beginin

Rocky's day for a bath
After chasing, placing
In torture chamber rath
Get him out then drying

Someone opens outside
Door; Rocky fastest thing
On four feet, look there
There he goes buggigdy, buggidy
And he ain't wear'n no clothes

Caleb three years' old
Comes running in saying
Rocky is out next to road
He's buck naked streaking

Buggidy, buggidy and he ain't 
A wearin' no clothes
Down by the road front
Running to the creek streaks

Who would have thought
That he would let the whole world peek
No halter on running loose on the street
Buggidy, buggidy "The Streak"

(After reading about Deborah's contest
this is my version of "The Streak")

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 8/19/2010 10:25:00 AM
nice flowing of this and interesting to read. keep up writing
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Date: 8/10/2010 10:16:00 AM
This is such a cute poem, Sara. Must be hard to give a toddler a bath. Great take on "The Streak." Best wishes in Deborah's contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/9/2010 7:01:00 PM
I am always drawn in Sara by your 'I Don't Know' poems they are always loaded. Lol, Congratulations on this one, You didn't disappoint this time either. Thanks sister, for your gracious comments on my poem. Agape, Moses
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Date: 8/9/2010 7:42:00 AM
How ingenious Sara.. what a great comparison ..good luck in Debbie's contest.. my Shepherd puppy is getting like lightening too...all of a sudden..but he loves his baths .. we have special tub just for him..like the little king he is.. enjoyed this creativity from u today Sara.. and the poem uposted after this one has no title for us to view my friend..with luv..
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Date: 8/9/2010 5:26:00 AM
funny!! LOL
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