A Bed of Nails

Life is like a bed of nails.

Just about the time you think you can rest,
  someone comes along to steal your nest.

Just about the time you think you'll make it,
  someone comes along to take it.

And when you think you'll slow down a bit,
  someone brings you a load of ****!

Then you think you've found "the one",
  just to find out it was just for fun.

Why is it always true
  that trouble seems to stick like glue?

And no matter what you do
  it inevitably comes back to you.

So don't sleep too long or too sound
  'cause trouble's always hanging 'round.

Stay alert and sleep light,
  and always be ready to fight!


By:  Carole O'Terry Duet
Copyright:  2017
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Wolf Avatar
February 1, 2017 at 11:57 PM
You did too! Well done escaping the soup police! Funny too!
Duet Avatar
February 2, 2017 at 11:46 PM
Thanks Budgie! ;-)
J.T. Avatar
December 13, 2016 at 6:14 PM
Trouble would have to wait until I get my beauty rest. Good poem -JT
Duet Avatar
December 14, 2016 at 6:17 PM
Hello, Honestly! Thanks for reading my poem and commenting. And, yes, life can take a toll on your beauty sometimes. Carole
Mudge Avatar
September 23, 2016 at 10:56 PM
typos! I really meant: It put me right back in the times when I also was not so lucky in love.
Duet Avatar
September 28, 2016 at 2:43 AM
Yes, John, I surely know what you mean. And, thank you so much for commenting.
Mudge Avatar
September 23, 2016 at 10:53 PM
it put me right back in the times when I also. So lucky in love.
Snyder Avatar
August 16, 2016 at 1:12 PM
cool write, u have a way of writing about reality, right one, but found it was just for there fun,
Teagan Avatar
August 3, 2016 at 9:50 AM
Unfortunately I think you're right about this! lol Good job, Carole!
Gupta Avatar
August 3, 2016 at 5:02 AM
Very nice ... Great humour ...
Godwin Avatar
August 3, 2016 at 2:49 AM
Good job of venting, Carole - I enjoyed the read ... CayCay
Allison Avatar
August 3, 2016 at 2:25 AM
Think I'd rather have a bed of roses in life but sadly life isn't like that lol -good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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