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- A Bed of Flowers -


                                          An aged rusty bed 

                                  and two pairs of worn out shoes

                                  A clear sign of human presence

                             and we wonder at the life that was here
 
                           The umbilical cord that binds us to the past

                        Was everything genuinely better in "the old days" ?








                                               14/05/2021
                                        Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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Horne Avatar
June 4, 2021 at 2:13 PM
this is really lovely
Gauthier Avatar
May 31, 2021 at 8:24 AM
Food for thought in your beautiful poem, Sunshine ~ congrats on your POTD
Allison Avatar
May 20, 2021 at 4:31 PM
so sorry i wasn't here to say many congrats on a very well deserved POTD:-) hugs jan xx
Daniel Avatar
May 20, 2021 at 7:04 AM
An excellent picture and apt words, thought provoking too:) congratulations on POTD, Sunshine:)
Rodrigues Avatar
May 19, 2021 at 7:22 AM
So beautiful! Love the shoes under the bed...the bed like a grave with seeds that sprout. Perhaps there were no “good day” Perhaps, upon reflection they are all “good days” Congratulations on POTD, dear one!
Bayles Avatar
May 17, 2021 at 8:15 PM
I enjoyed this poem, Sunshine. Very nice.
Michael Avatar
May 17, 2021 at 5:17 PM
Some say it was better...I had better times than these...Congratulations to Anne-Lise on POTD.
Downing  Avatar
May 17, 2021 at 2:00 PM
WOW!! I loved this! So beautiful and just a great poem.
Lamoureux Avatar
May 17, 2021 at 8:24 AM
What a great photo and poem. I see by the comments that it is POTD. What a excellent choice.congrats and a big hug.
Smith Avatar
May 17, 2021 at 7:11 AM
Terrific write Anne-Lise, The optimist says "the only thing better than today is tomorrow".
Mcintosh Avatar
May 17, 2021 at 3:39 AM
Love this, sweet lady. You're a heavenly whisper, like a smile, leaving footprints through my life. God bless you sweet friend, Love, Gina
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 17, 2021 at 12:42 AM
What a charming poem and picture to go with it Anne-Lise. Congratulations on your deserving POTD honor! Blessings, Connie xxoo
DiMino Avatar
May 16, 2021 at 6:40 PM
Every age has its mysteries -- we can learn much of benefit by simply observing the sensitive, endearing nature of others. Your flower bed is a perfect example. Have a beautiful, blossom filled day!!
Proxenos Avatar
May 16, 2021 at 9:36 AM
And I omitted to congratulate you, so exquisite - truly deserved for POTD my dear friend. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Proxenos Avatar
May 16, 2021 at 9:35 AM
Sunshine Smile you stand out in this group, for the amazing poetry you post on Soup. Kudos. Love and hugs Jennifer.
Buhagiar Avatar
May 16, 2021 at 1:41 AM
Congrats on your POTD, dear Anne Lise. Hope things are improving. Great hugs.
Wolf Avatar
May 15, 2021 at 8:20 PM
Great question asked on a great scene presented, Anne-Lise. Congrats on POTD, Gershon
Fenn Avatar
May 15, 2021 at 7:35 PM
Congrats Anne-Lise on this beautiful poem! It’s amazing that you convey these feelings of wonder and nostalgia in such few words! Well deserved POTD! Hugs to you, Jennifer
Andresen Avatar
May 18, 2021 at 4:38 AM
- I really appreciate your comments and congratulations, thank you very much, Jennifer :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Nicole Avatar
May 15, 2021 at 7:28 PM
Depends on how you look at it, I suppose. Those that had to use an outhouse and the rotary telephone will say, "the good ole days weren't that great." This is so beautifully written and presented. Congratulations Anne-Lise, on Poem of the Day. ~ Brandy
Andresen Avatar
May 18, 2021 at 4:37 AM
- When you mention the phone, Brandy ... we spend way too much time on the phone today ... if we look around ... 99% of people are busy with their mobile phone ... scary! - Thank you very much for your visit and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Dietrich Avatar
May 15, 2021 at 4:26 PM
oh and wow, a POTD I see. BIG congrats
Andresen Avatar
May 18, 2021 at 4:30 AM
- Many thanks for the congratulations, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Dietrich Avatar
May 15, 2021 at 4:25 PM
Not everything was better, but some things were! Nice poem to go with a very interesting picture.
Andresen Avatar
May 18, 2021 at 4:29 AM
- Agree ... thank you very much, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Goldsmith Avatar
May 15, 2021 at 11:46 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. A "Wonderful" write. Yes, we need the good old days back. Have a blessed day...............
Andresen Avatar
May 15, 2021 at 12:15 PM
- There is a lot that has become easier these days, with newfound technology and tremendous advances - We live longer, have made many diseases harmless, and most of us live with far better prosperity than the generations before us ... I would not replace everything ... but we have forgotten much that is important, Paula :) - Many thanks for the comments and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Merryman Avatar
May 15, 2021 at 9:08 AM
Such vivid imagery and a thought provoking question at the end. Great work, Anne-Lise! Congrats on your POTD! Blessings, Kim M
Andresen Avatar
May 15, 2021 at 12:10 PM
- Many thanks for the comments and congratulations, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Kitchin Avatar
May 15, 2021 at 8:52 AM
Anne-Lise, congratulations on POTD! :)
Andresen Avatar
May 15, 2021 at 12:09 PM
- Thank you very much, Tania :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Roper Avatar
May 15, 2021 at 7:27 AM
Great imagery,Sunshine, congratulations on POTD! Hugs Eve
Andresen Avatar
May 15, 2021 at 12:09 PM
- Eve, many thanks for the comments and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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