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A Beauty Like Yours

you make me thankful for every wrong turn iv ever made cause everyone of them led me into the arms of you, your face is an imaged iv been searching for my entire life and from the first sight of you i was unsure if my eyesight was true, cause a beauty like yours is only but in dreams or so it seemed, before I met you I thought the world was made up of coincidence and luck but i now know that is not true, there must be a god because a beauty like yours has only one explanation, no variation of simply a man and a women come together with sexual sensations but god only god could have created you, you are a flawless creature with features made from only the heavens above so amazing and beautiful that your beauty could be the death of me, cause when i write these words i write them for you i write because of you and i wright them to you, and the ink of my pens are running out and led from my pencils are in the form of words about you, words so sweet bees are attracted in every direction and even tho i am allergic i keep writing. so now i know god must be real i pray but i do not pray for want or need or money that grows on trees, no when im on my knees i pray for please, please god forgive me for not having faith and god please forgive me for my sins i don't no were to begin but i do ever since i saw you, i ask for forgiveness and remorse because when my time comes i want to walk through those pearly doors and see you, and for eternity i want to be with you and for the rest of time find new ways to please you.

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Date: 6/19/2013 9:11:00 AM
You are very welcome Peter, I want to be a fan of your poetry, and I wish for you to stick around for a long time. like your poem above, you offer nothing but sweetness through your words. I am a fan, and you are a favorite new poet.... luv~ SKAT
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Peter Hoopert
Date: 6/19/2013 10:31:00 AM
:D thankyou so much that means a lot
Date: 6/18/2013 9:53:00 AM
such beauty in this write, having believe in god after seeing a beauty that takes your breath away, enjoyed your lovely write ~always, Linda
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Date: 6/17/2013 3:38:00 AM
what lover wouldn't adore this comment?
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