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Contest: Write thirteen beautiful lines, sponsored by Constance La France.

“Spring is nature’s way of saying, ‘Let’s party.' ” —Robin Williams The early sunrise peaks in bright red crimson rays Nature is delivering Spring gifts in many ways Fresh Lilac blooms are opened and perfuming the air As butterflies and bees are keeping busy pollinating there A gentle breeze sways the one new pink peony bloom As new buds appear ready to make their floral boom A hummingbird appears and hovers as he feeds On fresh flower nectar that helps his energy needs Chipmunks scatter and chatter about as they play And try to sneak some bird seeds and flowers away Blue jays appear and perch to steal fresh squirrel food And squawk as they appear to bully with their brood This beautiful spring day is a gift that enlightens the mood

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Date: 4/26/2025 9:18:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "A Beautiful Spring Day" write. What a pretty flower picture. Have a blessed day with your win.......
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 4/26/2025 3:00:00 PM
Paula, thank you.
Date: 4/21/2025 3:44:00 PM
Captivating imagery throughout your fantastic poem, Tania. Spring is my favorite season. Best of luck in the contest!
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 4/21/2025 6:32:00 PM
Ed, thank you.
Date: 4/21/2025 12:22:00 PM
- Beautiful flowers in spring, Tania... even the dandelion is beautiful - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 4/21/2025 12:29:00 PM
Anne-Lise, thank you. - hugs
Date: 4/21/2025 11:32:00 AM
A peony, my favorite. Spring is a season of renewal. Lovely lines, Tania.
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 4/21/2025 11:41:00 AM
Lin, thank you. They are my favorite as well and I can't wait until they bloom every spring.

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