A 'Beautiful' Poem

Beautiful is the 'thank you'
Wrapped with gratitude, 
Offered to peace prone people
Who offer what is real-themselves
To nurse with love and humility
depressed and anxiety victims 
in our stained world

veiling ambition with face of
humanity.Beautiful is the moment
when sunlit world fades away 
And with it mind made mirror 
While look inward drawn, sight insight led, 
and heart shuts out desire to let in
consciousness.

i've met my prince and moved on from the flames
that almost licked my life away
i'm happy and free
like i was born to be
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Roper Avatar
October 13, 2018 at 9:14 PM
Congratulations on your fairytale win, Daisy, great imagery and so well done. :)
Y. Avatar
October 8, 2018 at 7:12 PM
Hi Daisy, Thanks for entering in your poem in my fairy tale contest. I enjoyed it very much. PS, I apologize for taking so long to judge the contest:-) Alexis
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 28, 2018 at 3:07 PM
Hello Daisy, yes this is a beautiful poem.Have a nice day my friend.
Kinch  Avatar
June 23, 2018 at 2:32 PM
So very beautiful Daisy.
Quigley Avatar
June 7, 2018 at 4:54 PM
Beautiful is a word that should be used more
Pett Avatar
June 4, 2018 at 10:52 AM
Beautifully written poem Daisy, you are very talented. :))
Tyrrell Avatar
June 5, 2018 at 5:16 AM
thankyou so much sir xx
Boreham Avatar
June 4, 2018 at 8:53 AM
Beautiful Daisy ! Really loved it, Thank you :)
Tyrrell Avatar
June 5, 2018 at 5:16 AM
hugs to you x
Michael Avatar
June 4, 2018 at 5:18 AM
You emit a lovely aroma from your words, refreshing with hope...All the best daisy
Tyrrell Avatar
June 5, 2018 at 5:18 AM
thank you i thought it would be nice change from all the depressing writes x
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