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A beautiful milestone of combined sentiment

How could I not love the level to which you live life perfect, so insouciant You would walk beside me in heavy rain, with no umbrella; to contentment We are both happy with our makeup, souls binded in water so succulent A combination of an unlikely myriad, to which we equally compliment Each other in a way that no one else would find the same contentment You are simply a convivial representative for my life's failed acknowledgment I hope you find this to be your own; a beautiful milestone of combined sentiment

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Date: 7/16/2024 10:44:00 AM
Ah, this is beautiful- you do the monorhymes so well
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Date: 7/16/2024 11:09:00 AM
That is an incredibly gracious compliment! For me the form it's like warm water. I could soak it in forever.I never grow tired of it. Thank you for making me feel very good! Sincerely A.S.

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