A beautiful feeling

Storms came with their own sounds.
Songs came with their own rhythm. 
Those sounds raced the heart of the lost one,
But the rhythms calmed the heart of the lonely one.
Not experiencing  the task of life,
May seem joyous .
But it's  indeed a great relief  ,
To learn a lesson from the life experienced. 
Life approaches  us,
With what we are not ready for.
Reminding us,
That karma is a great demeanour.
With regrets one might decide to give up.
But with great joy one is encouraged to live up .
The beauty of  life, should  not stop you ,
But the unbalanced  feeling should encourage you .
Though giving up may be relieving ,
Living life is a beautiful feeling.
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Kulkarni Avatar
May 2, 2024 at 4:35 PM
What an encouraging poem, Thelma! Loved your uplifting message! -Smita
Abraham  Avatar
May 5, 2024 at 4:42 AM
Thank you , i'm glad you loved it .
Eslinger Avatar
May 2, 2024 at 7:17 AM
Nice to meet you through this encouraging, hopeful poem. May the muse be with you!…….:-)
Abraham  Avatar
May 5, 2024 at 4:43 AM
Thank you , appreciate it .
Croft Avatar
March 17, 2024 at 1:17 AM
A beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing.
Abraham  Avatar
May 5, 2024 at 4:43 AM
Thank you for reading
Agustin Avatar
March 15, 2024 at 1:43 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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