A Beautiful Day With My Love

When the sun rise in the morning
then you shine like a brighten lady
When the moon set in the evening
then you look like a beautiful lady
When I go to bed in the night
then you twinkle like stars
When the cool breeze touches me
then I take care of your love
When you are under my arms
then I tell you how much I love you
When I say my night prayers
then I thank God for giving you to me
When I close my eyes to sleep
then you rest your head on my chest
and listen to my heart beat says you are mine.


Ravi Sathasivam / Sri Lanka
Copyright @2004 Ravi Sathasivam
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Carrillo Avatar
September 1, 2013 at 12:35 PM
This is very beautiful Ravi. You are a good husband, don't ever change. I hope you have a good wife too. Thanks for sharing...... Lucilla
Sathasivam Avatar
September 1, 2013 at 10:15 PM
Thanks and appreciate your comment.
Sanders Avatar
August 26, 2013 at 12:04 PM
Very soothing poet. I love how you put this together poet
Sathasivam Avatar
September 1, 2013 at 10:15 PM
thanks and appreciate your comment.
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