A Beautiful Caress

Desires fly away in the night
	Eternity grips the coming coldness
		Angels whisper soft words of solace
			Timeless, torments fade away
				Home at long last

artbeautifuldeathfeelingsintrospectionfree verse

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Charmaine Chircop

November 13, 2017 at 12:16 PM

I feel a sense of serenity towards the end.Such a beautiful poem Arturo.

Andrea Dietrich

November 12, 2017 at 7:30 PM

wow, gorgeous poem with a gorgeous picture. What more can we ask for than this?

Susan Ashley

November 12, 2017 at 4:08 PM

Such beautiful melancholy arthur. Wondrous artistic and poetic expression about loss softened by peace.. Excellent and enjoyed!

Tim Smith

November 12, 2017 at 1:21 PM

A beautiful melancholy write

Gary Bateman

November 12, 2017 at 7:20 AM

Hello Arthur, The word image you've crafted here with "A Beautiful Caress" has both a timeless and ethereal spirit to it. Very romantic and reassuring in the end. Superbly Done!! Best Always, Gary (P.S. The photo image is perfect too!! --GB)

Russell Sivey

November 12, 2017 at 6:51 AM

What I love about this incredible write is that you can get a different feel from it if you read it backwards, from the last line to the first, quite the interesting thing! I do love the way you have woven this write through peace and the love of the angels that see things in a different light than what we can see...and that the world would be better if we only could open our minds towards that light and focus on its reality! You poem inflicts great pleasure and pain at the same time, Great Work