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A Beautiful Butterfly

How do I describe this lass of mine She treats me like royalty, an honor divine Do I deserve it I wonder An elusion I'm under This beautiful creature a treasure defined

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Tom Cunningham

Date: 12/9/2019 12:01:00 PM

Royalty, well you are the limerick King, I'm raising my cap. Good day Jack.

Jack Ellison
Date: 12/9/2019 3:38:00 PM

Yea! All you peasants rise, salute your master! Ooops that may sound a bit pretentious eh! Sorry!

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 12/9/2019 8:41:00 AM

You are a lucky man. Good morning hugs and butterfly kisses! xomo

Jack Ellison
Date: 12/9/2019 8:51:00 AM

What a sweet thing to say, Miss Mo! "Butterfly kisses" to you... good morning my love, Happy Jack XOX

Na Na

Date: 12/9/2019 6:51:00 AM

nicely worded. I tried doing a butterfly in shape poem after 6 attempts I gave up man is it hard. Thanks for sharing

Na Na
Date: 12/10/2019 3:07:00 AM

I run out of room to the right and it goes down a line instead of to the right

Jack Ellison
Date: 12/9/2019 7:06:00 AM

Thank you muchly, my friend! I have never tried a "shape" poem... a butterfly, in particular, seems quite difficult! Give it another shot but something else as a subject! Have a great day my friend!