A Beautiful Butterfly

How do I describe this lass of mine She treats me like royalty, an honor divine Do I deserve it I wonder An elusion I'm under This beautiful creature a treasure defined
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Cunningham Avatar
December 9, 2019 at 12:01 PM
Royalty, well you are the limerick King, I'm raising my cap. Good day Jack.
Ellison Avatar
December 9, 2019 at 3:38 PM
Yea! All you peasants rise, salute your master! Ooops that may sound a bit pretentious eh! Sorry!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
December 9, 2019 at 8:41 AM
You are a lucky man. Good morning hugs and butterfly kisses! xomo
Ellison Avatar
December 9, 2019 at 8:51 AM
What a sweet thing to say, Miss Mo! "Butterfly kisses" to you... good morning my love, Happy Jack XOX
Na Avatar
December 9, 2019 at 6:51 AM
nicely worded. I tried doing a butterfly in shape poem after 6 attempts I gave up man is it hard. Thanks for sharing
Na Avatar
December 10, 2019 at 3:07 AM
I run out of room to the right and it goes down a line instead of to the right
Ellison Avatar
December 9, 2019 at 7:06 AM
Thank you muchly, my friend! I have never tried a "shape" poem... a butterfly, in particular, seems quite difficult! Give it another shot but something else as a subject! Have a great day my friend!
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