Johnny Rhinem Poet I do not know?

A Beautiful Angel

Gazing from afar, amid still frame silence...
Watching her making way unto the parks bench
Blue skies taking a drag from my cigarette; sketching
Divinities staircase within my mind; transcending this Autumn's
Canvas but a silhouette her bridals path winding, through a breath..
Reaching out her gentle hand whileas a white dove, the symbol of love 
Descends from it's perch atop porcelain clouds to drink, from this her tears
Pangful spheres risen from a crystal heart; cast aside yesteryears cherub wings...
She awaits endless dreams; to awaken from this valley of broken things; her beauty.

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Robin Davis February 5, 2014 at 11:50 AM Johnny Such a beautiful and amazing write. A wonderful "dream" of this angel that inspired this gorgeous poem. Nicely done Thanks for the great comment on my Crush You poem.

Poet Destroyer A October 27, 2013 at 10:42 AM John, ... Congratulations with your featured poem of the week. It was nice seeing it on the Poetry Soup-- HOME PAGE. Always a poetry soup friend <3 = LINDA

Skat A October 27, 2013 at 1:08 AM Hi John, CONGRATULATIONS ;) on having your poem featured................... LOVE SKAT

Debbie Guzzi October 26, 2013 at 2:38 PM Just lovely John an earth born angel! Light & Love

Lucilla Carrillo July 3, 2013 at 6:45 AM What a beautiful picture you have painted here for us to see, as beautiful as Your mind. Thanks for sharing. Sorry I can't get on line too much as I am still very sick, but I'm getting better.Thanks for reading my poetry...... Lucilla

Debbie Knapp June 26, 2013 at 6:49 PM My Friend, What a beautiful thought. It was as if you were really seeing everything you wrote. I think maybe angels are close to you in many ways.

Nefretiti Morant June 17, 2013 at 6:40 AM What a beautiful snippet of thoughts. I felt as if i were watching the scene unfold before my very eyes. Beautiful!!

Skat A May 25, 2013 at 11:54 AM very nice John.......... xox........ kisses and all SKAT

Dawn Mclaughlin May 24, 2013 at 2:07 PM Hi John thank you for such beautiful comment's. A beautiful write angelic and sounds like a divine being x

Charmaine Chircop May 24, 2013 at 9:01 AM Hi John..such a beautiful painting you ve created here..You re definitely inspired.Keep your ink flowing..So enchanting and going to my favs-always Charma

Richard Lamoureux May 24, 2013 at 6:55 AM I enjoyed your poem and the mood you created. I don't know why but the line where you take a drag on the cigarette pulled me into the poem and somehow made it seem more real. I seen your thoughtful comment to Eileen's poem and thought I would check out your work. If you have a chance check out the poem I written in Responce to hers that I have posted. Welcome to the soup

Grace Martin May 24, 2013 at 1:11 AM Beautiful write.. Welcome unto poe-site.. I am looking forward to seeing more of your writes.. ~Grace

Eileen Manassian May 22, 2013 at 3:40 PM Lovely imagery you have written here...There is beauty and sadness here. They often go hand in hand. You have portrayed this well! Thanks for your visits. :)

Sasha Maharaj May 22, 2013 at 2:45 AM Beautiful indeed :)

Sharon Ruebel May 21, 2013 at 2:45 PM Hello John, And what a beautiful Canvas you have painted here for us....Sad as I know what broken dreams are, I think we all do. Your lovely words drift down slowly on this heart. Thank you it is wonderful. Love, Shar

Cortney Bartholomew May 21, 2013 at 12:50 PM John! :) yay! so glad your back! :) absolutely beautiful poem!!! looking forward to seeing more...i just came back to the site not too long ago myself..God Bless!! :)

Debbie Duncan May 21, 2013 at 12:25 PM Love this Johnny,,,,, welcome to poetrysoup, I seen you on Annie's page. I will be reading your next poem,, again, welcome ;}

Anne-Lise Andresen May 21, 2013 at 9:24 AM - Johnny, welcome to P-Soup - Thanks for your lovely poem, you write very well. - Hope you will get much pleasure from sharing your thoughts and words here with us. - Would appreciate a visit from you at my poems. - Good luck, Johnny! - Have a nice week. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)