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A Barren Antelope

____A Barren Antelope (Unedited)____ A barren antelope Visits the world of the living She is searching for the Messiah’s hands To bless her womb with living Kids, kids, everywhere, she Wants to bear her own, She wants to be a mother And be called mother antelope She cry and cry and cry over the Kilimanjaro And Everest She weep across the Atlanta searching for Messiah’s hands. She want it, she want it She want a good image A bad image to be buried To be buried and a good image to live on. She wants a life to live She wants a heart of her own Who will help her out Now that the rumour have Spread that the Messiah Had gone… Gone for life To another life Shadowy and deep Yet to be know by Many. Yet to be visit by all . A berry paradise A cherry light. For: Worst poem contest Sponsor by: PD

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Date: 5/8/2013 10:24:00 AM
Congrats on your win as well Abdul!
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Date: 5/5/2013 7:02:00 PM
Way to go! I knew this would be a winner.
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Date: 5/5/2013 5:37:00 PM
Stop by my latest blog... :-) PD
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Date: 5/5/2013 5:35:00 PM
Abdulhafeez, your poem is what it is! Sorry 2 say you took the pie out the refrigerator with this one. CONGRATULATIONS ;-) Thank you for participating in my worst poem contest. I don't know if I should call this an honor, but it has been something different... It's always a pleasure running odd contest. Take Care~ LINDA
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Date: 5/1/2013 7:56:00 AM
What can I say, this poem SUCKS! Ha ha
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Date: 4/30/2013 5:40:00 PM
It's is actually a poem that touches me on a visceral level. I want you to win but I can't say this poem is without it's merits........ Good luck in the contest SuZ
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Date: 4/30/2013 12:13:00 AM
I feel strange saying "good luck on the contest"... but I guess this contest is all for fun's sake... lol. I'll be honest it started off fairly well. But the ending was just random and a bit nonsensical. There is one that I really wanna post for the contest, but I can't remember if I deleted it or not out of sheer embarrassment... anyway... interesting stuff! I think you captured the essence of the contest :)
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