Lovern Naidoo Poet Alliteration

A Bad Feeling

I had this feeling that something was about to happen,
What it was I wasn't sure ,good or bad  I wasn't going to ignore,
With the twitching of my eyes and the palpitations of my heart,
I prayed and waited hoping it was something good ,
But feared it could be bad.

It was a gift I wished I had never had,
For it only made others mad,
A crazy feeling a stupid feeling a feeling that just won't go away,
I pray each day I would wake up and it will be there no more,
But I last had this feeling six months ago,
Now I  try my best to wipe it away with prayer every day,
Oh how I wish this feeling would go away.

By Lovern Naidoo

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Beata Agustin February 24, 2025 at 3:46 AM Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Have a blessed day.