A Bad, Bad Dream

In the far off distance the cannons make their report,
As we huddle in groups to show our support.

Blindly attacked, all we can do is to try to hit back,
Hiding in light, it’s at night when we assume our attack.

Outnumbered and outgunned since the government took nearly every one,
They made it illegal for citizens to possess any type of gun.

But some held on and it was a good thing that they did,
As the enemy infiltrated our borders and shores we retrieved them from where they were hid.

There is no Geneva Convention, and no rules to this war,
Brutality and chaos have been our strongest weapon so far.

This was the way it was given to us, so reverse play is fair don’t you see,
They wanted to take our freedom but that is something you won’t take from me.

It was like a horror movie that night that seems so long ago,
In the middle of the night it started with no warning you know.

Loud noise and confusion as mortars and rifle fire entered our peaceful little town,
People running and screaming and for no reason being mercilessly shot down.

9-11 was just a testing of the waters to see how we would react,
As they put together their plan for this unholy attack.

Our country has been divided and our resources are few,
But we’ll fight to our death, that’s all that’s left for me and for you!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 7/23/2008 2:16:00 PM
We are getting it from the government and the enemy. Now look at our choices for leadership. It's like getting kicked while you're down. Good write. Vince
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Date: 7/19/2008 5:40:00 AM
So very frightening. I have had similar nightmares. Let's hope it is justified fear and not an omen. Love, Shar
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Date: 7/19/2008 3:35:00 AM
Scary, scary...I agree, this country needs to get it's act together and act, not RE-ACT! All I know is it better be Mcain next year, or we are in BIG trouble! (not that I'm a huge fan of mcain, but at least he's good about the war issues)
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Date: 7/18/2008 9:47:00 PM
I can see our country crumbling but I personally believe it will come from with-in - Our leaders have totally lost sight of the common mans fate - as the price of fuel goes up everything is destined to follow - I enjoyed yourpoem
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Date: 7/18/2008 5:10:00 PM
Interesting and timely poem, leaving the reader with thoughts to ponder. Nice use of rhyme. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 7/18/2008 3:28:00 PM
I saw a movie called Red Dawn, this is scary....and it could very well happen...who knows what is in store for us...Always, Christy
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