A Backwards Poem-Needing Each Other

me needing you through good and bad times shared of joy and love with forgiveness linked into redemption saved through troubled times with truth is grace loving daily portrayed and pure is love through me needing you Forgive me, the "Backwards Poem" form is not an option on Poetry Soup so I listed it as a "verse". It is a form of poetry which can be read correctly downwards and upwards also. I used a strict syllable count of: 1-2-2-3-3-4-4-5-5-4-4-3-3-2-2-1 Date Written: June 30, 2016
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La France Avatar
July 16, 2016 at 3:41 PM
Laura, nicely done, quite a challenge for your backwards contest, but I will give it a whirl, I am loving this 7 ~
Scars Avatar
July 17, 2016 at 11:31 AM
thanks Broken Wings, I'm sure you will do great :)-luloo
Misra Avatar
July 4, 2016 at 10:41 AM
Wonderful new form to learn, Laura. That was both masterful and beautiful.
Scars Avatar
July 5, 2016 at 5:28 PM
thank you Karam :)-luloo
Bankson Avatar
July 1, 2016 at 12:25 PM
That's Pimp!!I don't say pimp 12/7
Scars Avatar
July 1, 2016 at 12:41 PM
thanks Jai :)-luloo
Worthy Avatar
June 30, 2016 at 6:18 PM
Awesome -love JW
Scars Avatar
July 1, 2016 at 12:40 PM
thank you Justin :)-luloo
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