A Baboon On the Moon

[Written for my four year old great granddaughter
who has developed an interest in the moon. Only after
writing it did I discover already existing ’stuff’ called
‘A baboon on the moon’. Never mind... Who wants a 
Booker prize anyway?] [In UK bum is bottom]


There’s a baboon on the moon
And he’s got a shiny bum
And if he wasn’t up there
Bed time would be glum

He isn’t on his own 
He’s got his sisters and his mum
And when it’s getting dark
They turn their backs toward the sun

The the moon is made of rock 
Yet it glows up in the sky
Which should be quite a shock
Have you never wondered why

When baboons stick their bottoms up 
Toward the setting sun
The moon so brightly glows
Because the sun shines off their bum
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Wolf Avatar
March 4, 2021 at 3:12 PM
I'd sure be interested in your daughter's reaction to this classic write! ~ Ho Bo y
Flood Avatar
March 4, 2021 at 5:08 PM
Unfortunately, due to lockdown, we haven’t shown her yet. I’ve made it into a little illustrated booklet for her. So we’ll wait and see. Thanks, Gershon. Terry
Cunningham Avatar
February 23, 2021 at 12:37 PM
So its not made of cheese then lol. lovely verse for children Terry. Tom
Flood Avatar
February 23, 2021 at 2:53 PM
Thanks Tom. I rarely do kiddy stuff because my inner ‘fiend’ takes over and limbs and heads begin to fly. I was pleased to keep this one bloodless! Terry
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