My Thought On Life

My Thought On Life Miracle Man 7/10/2024 Life was meant to be a journey of unknown steps, but for many, death comes before first footsteps. Unwanted by a mother, some are sentenced to death, an innocent life claimed before it’s first breath. Claudia Elezibeth Benzio Written: by Tom Wright We never met little Claudia face to face, But she gave hope to our lives for a time. A monthly letter or picture she might trace, Was enough to make our lives quite sublime. The Orphanage tutored her in English preparing, For the day we both felt sure would come. That this little life would our lives soon be sharing, Only to learn that things would soon turn glum. For soon, her correspondence suddenly stopped, A living mother had returned with prior claim. Thus slaying the plans we had to soon adopt, I've prayed the loss we felt was Claudia's gain.
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Date: 7/13/2024 6:28:00 AM
Darlene, I have piggy-backed Claudia's poem to My Thoughts On Life so you can read it. Tom
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/13/2024 2:55:00 PM
Hello Tom, i have read the poem. both of your hearts were in the right place. Sometimes the birth mother changes her mind to raise the child by herself. My heart goes out to both of you. This poem will be my fav. blessing my friend. /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/13/2024 2:45:00 PM
Hello Tom, thank you Tom. I will read it now. Enjoy your evening my friend. /Darlene./
Date: 7/11/2024 3:57:00 PM
Hello Tom, i ay let the baby be born . Then adopted into a family that will love the baby. Enjoy ypur evening my cfriend. /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/12/2024 10:17:00 AM
Hello Tom , I wanted to read the poem Claudia Elizabeth Benzio I went through all of your poetry, i was not able to find it. So i feel disappointed. I hope you are still able to keep in touch with her. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/12/2024 9:48:00 AM
Hellom tom Wright, You adopted a girl from Argentina! That is wonderful. do you still keep in touch with her? I like her name. Yes of course. I will read your poem.Thank you tom. I will And I love Jesus. /Darlene/
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Date: 7/12/2024 3:54:00 AM
Darlene, My wife and I had no children and turned out to be "D.I.N.K' S. We tried to adopt twice but one was an Indian child and we weren't Indian. We sponsored a little girl in an orphanage in Argentina for about 13 years. I have a poem named Claudia Elezibeth Benzio that you might read sometime. have a great week end and Jesus loves you. Tom
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