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I Breathe Deep In the Darkness

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I wait for his phone call then remember he was gone. 
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Gray fog ease over gnarled trees and fallen bark, obscure to rusting leaves and gentle whisper, little more than a murmur, in the darkness. Inward whirls around in my main enthralled world; this is the ambiance I breathe deep and sigh, I gasp and utter silent sounds, in stark dreams. 4/29/2021 Surprise me Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Line Gauthier

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Date: 5/12/2021 3:36:00 PM
This is so beautiful dear Eve. I am captivated by your few but powerful words! Would love to read this again and again for years and years to come. A FAVE!!
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Date: 4/30/2021 10:57:00 PM
WoW! Lots of emotion in this piece and the picture adds to it. Nice job. God Bless, JB
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Date: 4/30/2021 5:13:00 AM
Emotive write, Eve--missing a loved one in silence of the night---breathing in loneliness. So well done!
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Date: 4/30/2021 3:26:00 AM
delicate and pretty; reverent.
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Date: 4/29/2021 10:54:00 PM
Cannot but be a sad poem but you used the chosen words perfectly. Your poetry always excels.
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Date: 4/29/2021 9:13:00 PM
Wow!
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