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She longs to take possession of her heart, but she quickly forgets. He used his flattering power to gleam the pages and feast. Like the wind tossing the spider holding tight on a single web. She retraces the steps in her mind, her soul dares not sleep to be shattered by silence. She wonders if it will work, are they destined to reach for spring sunshine, a bouquet of wondrous beauty and sweetness. Like an eagle caged, she stumbles and thought about the man in her heart. Her spirit calms a heavenly trust. 6/26/2018
Poetry Contest: Strand Special 10,Any Form ,Any Theme Sponsored by: Brian Strand

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Date: 1/8/2019 3:03:00 PM
Very expressive work. Enjoyed reading this winner. Congrats. Sara
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Date: 7/27/2018 4:32:00 AM
Hello Eve, Congratulations on your win!! This is a beautiful prose verse for sure. I read your verse here several times in fact. Your last two verses are highly symbolic and capture a distinct message to the reader. Superb Work!! And a FAVE!! Best Always, Gary
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Date: 7/21/2018 10:54:00 PM
Well penned, Eve. Congrats on your podium finish.
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Date: 7/21/2018 1:01:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A beautiful and romantic poem about fate.
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Date: 7/20/2018 1:32:00 PM
Eve, congratulations on this fabulous poem and great win.
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Date: 7/19/2018 2:25:00 PM
Back again to say congratulations, this poem reall is very beautiful and no matter how any times you read it you are definitely going to like it, good luck and have a really nice day
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Date: 7/19/2018 7:40:00 AM
- Many of the poems are so beautiful that they hit me in the heart ... I'm so glad I'm not going to judge ... I'm just gonna congratulate you on your beautiful win, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/19/2018 7:37:00 AM
sometimes it is special sometimes it is not... Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 7/1/2018 6:55:00 AM
Such a sweet, romantic and beautiful poem it is, full of imagery especially the last line, it certainly made me fall in love with this is poem, a fav for me and certainly a joy to read, good luck
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Date: 6/27/2018 1:20:00 PM
Beautiful romantic verse Eve. Good luck in the contest. Tom
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Date: 6/27/2018 8:51:00 AM
Beautiful verse, Eve. "Like the wind tossing the spider" great imagery XXOO
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Eve Roper
Date: 6/27/2018 9:07:00 AM
Thank you so much dear friend .. hugs Eve
Date: 6/27/2018 8:10:00 AM
A sweet beautiful write! An introspective journey about the sweet chaining love! The shackles of wondrous love we shall never deplore! A joy to read and a FAV. Thank you for sharing Eve. Stay blessed.
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Eve Roper
Date: 6/27/2018 9:06:00 AM
Thank you, Besma, you are so kind hugs Eve
Date: 6/27/2018 12:39:00 AM
Eve this is so so so romantic and beautiful! This is a fav too!!!
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Eve Roper
Date: 6/27/2018 9:02:00 AM
Thank you so much for the inspiring compliment and the fav. Hugs Eve
Date: 6/27/2018 12:05:00 AM
Eve.. I'm taken captive by every line, like a stand that ties me up. I don't want to escape. I'm tied to perfection!
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Eve Roper
Date: 6/27/2018 9:00:00 AM
Thank you so much, Lyric Man.. hugs Eve