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Has Fate Have Something Special Planned

She longs to take possession of her heart, but she quickly forgets. He used his flattering power to gleam the pages and feast. Like the wind tossing the spider holding tight on a single web. She retraces the steps in her mind, her soul dares not sleep to be shattered by silence. She wonders if it will work, are they destined to reach for spring sunshine, a bouquet of wondrous beauty and sweetness. Like an eagle caged, she stumbles and thought about the man in her heart. Her spirit calms a heavenly trust. 6/26/2018
Poetry Contest: Strand Special 10,Any Form ,Any Theme Sponsored by: Brian Strand
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Kendrick Avatar
January 8, 2019 at 3:03 PM
Very expressive work. Enjoyed reading this winner. Congrats. Sara
Bateman Avatar
July 27, 2018 at 4:32 AM
Hello Eve, Congratulations on your win!! This is a beautiful prose verse for sure. I read your verse here several times in fact. Your last two verses are highly symbolic and capture a distinct message to the reader. Superb Work!! And a FAVE!! Best Always, Gary
Gauthier Avatar
July 21, 2018 at 10:54 PM
Well penned, Eve. Congrats on your podium finish.
Gentry Avatar
July 21, 2018 at 1:01 AM
Congratulations on your win. A beautiful and romantic poem about fate.
Moorman Avatar
July 20, 2018 at 1:32 PM
Eve, congratulations on this fabulous poem and great win.
Ajmal Avatar
July 19, 2018 at 2:25 PM
Back again to say congratulations, this poem reall is very beautiful and no matter how any times you read it you are definitely going to like it, good luck and have a really nice day
Andresen Avatar
July 19, 2018 at 7:40 AM
- Many of the poems are so beautiful that they hit me in the heart ... I'm so glad I'm not going to judge ... I'm just gonna congratulate you on your beautiful win, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
One Avatar
July 19, 2018 at 7:37 AM
sometimes it is special sometimes it is not... Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Ajmal Avatar
July 1, 2018 at 6:55 AM
Such a sweet, romantic and beautiful poem it is, full of imagery especially the last line, it certainly made me fall in love with this is poem, a fav for me and certainly a joy to read, good luck
Cunningham Avatar
June 27, 2018 at 1:20 PM
Beautiful romantic verse Eve. Good luck in the contest. Tom
Gentile Avatar
June 27, 2018 at 8:51 AM
Beautiful verse, Eve. "Like the wind tossing the spider" great imagery XXOO
Roper Avatar
June 27, 2018 at 9:07 AM
Thank you so much dear friend .. hugs Eve
Riabi Dziri Avatar
June 27, 2018 at 8:10 AM
A sweet beautiful write! An introspective journey about the sweet chaining love! The shackles of wondrous love we shall never deplore! A joy to read and a FAV. Thank you for sharing Eve. Stay blessed.
Roper Avatar
June 27, 2018 at 9:06 AM
Thank you, Besma, you are so kind hugs Eve
Vaso Avatar
June 27, 2018 at 12:39 AM
Eve this is so so so romantic and beautiful! This is a fav too!!!
Roper Avatar
June 27, 2018 at 9:02 AM
Thank you so much for the inspiring compliment and the fav. Hugs Eve
Man Avatar
June 27, 2018 at 12:05 AM
Eve.. I'm taken captive by every line, like a stand that ties me up. I don't want to escape. I'm tied to perfection!
Roper Avatar
June 27, 2018 at 9:00 AM
Thank you so much, Lyric Man.. hugs Eve
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