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dawning aurora draws luminous hummingbirds ~ radiant moment 7/7/22 Contest: Bite Size Poem no48 Poetry Contest Sponsor: Line Gauthier

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Date: 9/18/2022 12:14:00 PM
This poem paints a such a vivid picture in my minds eye, I really enjoyed it :)
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 9/18/2022 1:08:00 PM
Julie, thank you!
Date: 7/17/2022 3:39:00 AM
They do give off a glow. Enjoyed reading your work today. Sara
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 7/17/2022 4:17:00 AM
Sara, thank you very much!
Date: 7/12/2022 12:18:00 PM
I can see the streamers of reddish and green lights filtering through the wings of the hummingbirds! Another perfect bite-size Tania.
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 7/12/2022 4:07:00 PM
Thank you, Anaya!
Date: 7/11/2022 2:05:00 AM
This is very beautiful, I can feel the colors.
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 7/11/2022 6:37:00 PM
Thank you, Victor!
Date: 7/8/2022 8:24:00 PM
Love how you blend together the colours, Tania, Ever so visual...
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 7/9/2022 5:42:00 AM
Thank you, Harry!
Date: 7/7/2022 12:08:00 PM
Those first moments of dawn are my favorite minutes of each day. Lovely write, Tania.
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 7/7/2022 2:34:00 PM
Thank you Jenna!
Date: 7/7/2022 9:55:00 AM
- Lovely haiku, Tania :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 7/7/2022 11:59:00 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise! hugs
Date: 7/7/2022 8:37:00 AM
Beautiful Haiku. But you did not read my last post.
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 7/7/2022 12:00:00 PM
Thank you Victor, not sure what post you're referring to?