Dawning

dawning aurora
draws luminous hummingbirds ~
radiant moment

7/7/22

Contest: Bite Size Poem no48 Poetry Contest
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Julie Draper

September 18, 2022 at 12:14 PM

This poem paints a such a vivid picture in my minds eye, I really enjoyed it :)

Tania Kitchin

September 18, 2022 at 1:08 PM

Julie, thank you!

Sara Kendrick

July 17, 2022 at 3:39 AM

They do give off a glow. Enjoyed reading your work today. Sara

Tania Kitchin

July 17, 2022 at 4:17 AM

Sara, thank you very much!

Victor Buhagiar

July 11, 2022 at 2:05 AM

This is very beautiful, I can feel the colors.

Tania Kitchin

July 11, 2022 at 6:37 PM

Thank you, Victor!

Harry Horsman

July 8, 2022 at 8:24 PM

Love how you blend together the colours, Tania, Ever so visual...

Tania Kitchin

July 9, 2022 at 5:42 AM

Thank you, Harry!

Jenna Logan

July 7, 2022 at 12:08 PM

Those first moments of dawn are my favorite minutes of each day. Lovely write, Tania.

Tania Kitchin

July 7, 2022 at 2:34 PM

Thank you Jenna!

Anne-Lise Andresen

July 7, 2022 at 9:55 AM

- Lovely haiku, Tania :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tania Kitchin

July 7, 2022 at 11:59 AM

Thank you Anne-Lise! hugs

Victor Buhagiar

July 7, 2022 at 8:37 AM

Beautiful Haiku. But you did not read my last post.

Tania Kitchin

July 7, 2022 at 12:00 PM

Thank you Victor, not sure what post you're referring to?

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