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One Gray Hair

As a feeling of being young And being able to hold breathe I took myself to swim along To the far far ends of the Earth While doing it I got afraid I tried to ignore the knee bang That came with a wave underneath Gray hair reflected as watch rung Started being afraid of depth The gray got bold I am so old Date : 10 March 2018

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Date: 5/7/2018 9:19:00 AM
I took myself to swim along To the far far ends of the Earth This line alone makes the poem wonderful!
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Thabang coleen
Date: 5/7/2018 9:29:00 AM
Thanks...