9 Darkness

I was lost in the darkness with no way out, until you come into my life and you become my
light and I found my way out of the darkness, sadness and pain, when you come into my life
everything every problem want away, but before you come I was stuck in the darkness with
so much pain  because for me love did not excites for me love was just pain, dark days,
rainy days, sad days, depressing days, everyday was the some. I set in the darkness with
so much pain saying to my self love was not made for me because every time I love a girl
she never loves me back. I kept on trying no girl would love me, like me not care about me
and the one that got hurt was me only me just me, as time passed by it got worst for me
darkness was covering me depression was killing me slowly, so much pain in my heart
suicidal thoughts run through my mind I was out of my mind I did not know what to do,
nobody  knew what I was going through every time I saw my friends and family I smiled and
laughed and played around so they wouldn't see how bad this pain was killing me,destroying
me slowly, I was so lonely I wanted a girl to tell me she loves me, that she cares about
me, but it never happen, everyday and night I cried thinking to myself why is this
happening to me why can't I find someone that loves me and when I thought there was no
hope for me you come, you made me believe that love still excites because you brought
sunshine into my life and took away the rain and the darkness of my days, you brought love
into my heart and took away the pain and sadness of my days, you brought happiness, joy
and took everything else bad away. now the darkness that use to cover me day to day is so
far away now there is sunshine covering me everyday since you come, I'm so glad that you
come into my life and changed my ways
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September 24, 2026 at 6:38 AM
I've really been enjoying your poem and the emotions and imagery were so vivid that i could easily picture them as beautiful illustration. I'm a commission-based manga/webtoon artist,and I’d love to discuss the possibility of bringing this poem to life if you're ever interested. Feel free to reach out at gm@il : akiracomicart2@ or on inst@: eve_verse_
Agustin Avatar
September 15, 2026 at 10:48 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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March 26, 2016 at 9:27 PM
Luis Becerra, you've expressed yourself well, I like the way you ended the poem. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry when you have time. Happy Easter ** LOVE LINDA
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August 10, 2015 at 6:52 PM
LUIS, a wonderful read.... LOVE *SKAT*
Murphy Avatar
November 25, 2008 at 3:50 PM
i used to feel like that too but i had guys tell me that they love me but they never ment it until the one i have now so i can relate to this poem
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