David William Breidenthal Poet Free verse

9 Am - 6 Pm

I’m feeling so alive at 9 AM to 6 PM
I want to be like them…amen…
I’m feeling so peculiar tonight
But, I’m feeling so alive and my, how I fly

I’m near rhyming like Taylor Swift and George Strait
I’m not thinking straight, but I’m on my way
To feel my fate before my hands at hand
I want to be like Beyoncé — telephoning without a flaw…

I’m feeling so alive at 9 AM to 6 PM tonight
I want to be like them, but I’m feeling so high
I’m feeling so peculiar today
But, I’m feeling so alive and not full of hate

I’m feeling so alive at 9 AM to 6 PM
I want to be like them all over again
I’m feeling so peculiar tonight
Yet, I’m coming undone and I don’t know why

I’m near rhyming like Taylor Swift and George Strait
I’m not thinking straight, but I’m on my way
To feel my fate before my hands at hand
I want to be like Beyoncé — telephoning without a flaw…

I’m feeling so alive at 9 AM to 6 PM tonight
I want to be like them, but I’m feeling so high
I’m feeling so peculiar today
But, I’m feeling so alive and not full of hate

I’m feeling so alive…
I’ll give it all of me to try
To be the best version of me
Can’t you see me possibly? 
I want to be like them at 9 AM to 6 PM
I want to be like them again, amen…
Can’t you see me, shining bright like a diamond
Like Rihanna, who I’m fond of a ton!

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