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It was very early in the morning, the sun was asleep
There was a few stars still hanging in the sky, and in the distance you could here wolves 
weep
Frigid was the presence and the temperature bit the bones
I rose to my feet excited I was for that day I would see my love

And I began to day dream of what the day would be
I write away with my imagination only to realize she was making her way toward me
Stoked thy stood, drooling at her beauty
I made love to her with my sight

I could never forget the smile that stretched across her face
I recall her eyes, for they spoke of her inner feelings
I reached for her hand but in one breath she already had mine
Her love and affection make my world shine

The sun caressed my eyes but I would not take them off of her
I rubbed my hands on her thighs as she responded with a deep  deep sigh
Spontaneously the heat began to rise again I could not take my eyes off her eyes
Arriving at our destination I realized the sun ate the day

So I took her by the hand and made way to my chamber
I slowly began to speak to her body with my hands, they spoke of art
It must have been a million of kisses that I planted on her skin but I still felt the urge to 
bond with her more
So I came upon arrival to enter into her forever as one











inspired by true events
I love you Alley
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Haick Avatar
October 13, 2009 at 8:49 AM
Eduardo, another excellent piece! Have you published a book of poetry for Alley, yet? If not, you need to think about it. These are beautiful and will make good memories! Peace, always, Audrey (Ladybug12)
Shahwan Avatar
October 12, 2009 at 5:47 PM
Beautifully penned.
Chircop Avatar
September 27, 2009 at 10:25 AM
your writes are so sweet,this one no exception full of love and passion Mr french guy to your lovely Alley-love Charma
Brown Avatar
September 26, 2009 at 6:58 AM
Thank you for sharing and giving us the pleasure of reading your splendid poetry today. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors where ever they may lead you.Thank you for your kind comments Eddie. Love, Carol
Ahmad Avatar
September 25, 2009 at 12:08 PM
Good one!
Guzzi Avatar
September 24, 2009 at 9:35 PM
"the sun ate the day" wonderful image. Light & Love
Poe Avatar
September 24, 2009 at 9:31 PM
I love you forever my poet -Always your Alley
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