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It was very early in the morning, the sun was asleep There was a few stars still hanging in the sky, and in the distance you could here wolves weep Frigid was the presence and the temperature bit the bones I rose to my feet excited I was for that day I would see my love And I began to day dream of what the day would be I write away with my imagination only to realize she was making her way toward me Stoked thy stood, drooling at her beauty I made love to her with my sight I could never forget the smile that stretched across her face I recall her eyes, for they spoke of her inner feelings I reached for her hand but in one breath she already had mine Her love and affection make my world shine The sun caressed my eyes but I would not take them off of her I rubbed my hands on her thighs as she responded with a deep deep sigh Spontaneously the heat began to rise again I could not take my eyes off her eyes Arriving at our destination I realized the sun ate the day So I took her by the hand and made way to my chamber I slowly began to speak to her body with my hands, they spoke of art It must have been a million of kisses that I planted on her skin but I still felt the urge to bond with her more So I came upon arrival to enter into her forever as one inspired by true events I love you Alley

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/13/2009 8:49:00 AM
Eduardo, another excellent piece! Have you published a book of poetry for Alley, yet? If not, you need to think about it. These are beautiful and will make good memories! Peace, always, Audrey (Ladybug12)
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Date: 10/12/2009 5:47:00 PM
Beautifully penned.
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Date: 9/27/2009 10:25:00 AM
your writes are so sweet,this one no exception full of love and passion Mr french guy to your lovely Alley-love Charma
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Date: 9/26/2009 6:58:00 AM
Thank you for sharing and giving us the pleasure of reading your splendid poetry today. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors where ever they may lead you.Thank you for your kind comments Eddie. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/25/2009 12:08:00 PM
Good one!
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Date: 9/24/2009 9:35:00 PM
"the sun ate the day" wonderful image. Light & Love
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Date: 9/24/2009 9:31:00 PM
I love you forever my poet -Always your Alley
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