David William Breidenthal Poet Free verse

9:11 Pm On 9-11

9:11 PM on 9/11

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I give honor to those heroic 
Individuals who have sacrificed their lives 

Thanks, everyone, who viewed this day with
Reverence, consideration and meekness 

For all who passed away on this day – 
I’m sorry to hear of the destruction you

Saw with terror and grief…soon, there will 
Be peace on Earth…Rest in Peace and rise in Mirth 

Ev’ry year, when this day comes, sorrow
Sweeps over me…at nine eleven PM

Chaos will keep on brewing…grab the
Rope of hope…We need the Divine Savior soon…

For all who are grieving on this day,
I’d like to hand you a handkerchief…don’t weep!

Take heart, you cold-blooded Terrorists
Who p-planned on taking down the Twin Towers

Rest in peace…when you all awaken, 
Be in High Spirits, you splendid sunrises

Written by me ~  
This poem is dedicated wholeheartedly to the 9/11 event ~

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Duke Beaufort September 14, 2014 at 7:20 PM Thank you for remembering that very unfortunate Tuesday. I know exactly where I was when this went down. It was an unfortunate event. David William Breidenthal February 20, 2016 at 8:06 AM You're welcome!!

Ettie Christian-Bowling September 12, 2014 at 10:10 AM By far I love this poem more than my own...It truly did touch me-Love Ettie David William Breidenthal February 20, 2016 at 8:05 AM Thank you!