Alexis Y. Poet Free verse

911

I tried to resist you
You're no good
for me
You're bad to the
core
I love you
I hate you
I don't know what I feel
When I’m around you 
I don't know what
or who I am
What I feel for you
is powerful 
And much bigger
and stronger than
me
So 
Help!
Help!
Help!
911!

3-26-17
Alexis Y

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Afzal Nusker April 19, 2017 at 9:23 AM This is one is quite creative in expressing dilemma.

Freddie Robinson Jr. March 30, 2017 at 10:18 AM I love this poem, Alexis. I agree w/Arthur, it is raw and real. Like Tatianna said, very relatable. We've all felt that type of helpless feeling over someone. Real cool poem. Real, no substitute. Love and peace, dear.

Chris Green March 27, 2017 at 7:00 AM This feels so sad and desperate. The emotions in this run high and are expressed loudly. Wouldn't it be nice if a phone call could send someone to help with matters of the heart. Really nicely done Alexis.

Tatianna Leachet March 27, 2017 at 6:56 AM This is fairly relateable. Many have experienced this feeling before :) Nice job. I really liked it :)

Jan Allison March 26, 2017 at 6:09 PM Emergency department ... which service do you require... we don't deal with issues of the heart! Title pulled me in Alexis and think many can relate to this:-) hugs Jan xx

Arthur Vaso March 26, 2017 at 3:51 PM I love the raw emotion of this, oh we have all been there at least once! :)