911

I tried to resist you You're no good for me You're bad to the core I love you I hate you I don't know what I feel When I’m around you I don't know what or who I am What I feel for you is powerful And much bigger and stronger than me So Help! Help! Help! 911! 3-26-17 Alexis Y

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Afzal Nusker

Date: 4/19/2017 9:23:00 AM

This is one is quite creative in expressing dilemma.

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 3/30/2017 10:18:00 AM

I love this poem, Alexis. I agree w/Arthur, it is raw and real. Like Tatianna said, very relatable. We've all felt that type of helpless feeling over someone. Real cool poem. Real, no substitute. Love and peace, dear.

Chris Green

Date: 3/27/2017 7:00:00 AM

This feels so sad and desperate. The emotions in this run high and are expressed loudly. Wouldn't it be nice if a phone call could send someone to help with matters of the heart. Really nicely done Alexis.

Tatianna Leachet

Date: 3/27/2017 6:56:00 AM

This is fairly relateable. Many have experienced this feeling before :) Nice job. I really liked it :)

Jan Allison

Date: 3/26/2017 6:09:00 PM

Emergency department ... which service do you require... we don't deal with issues of the heart! Title pulled me in Alexis and think many can relate to this:-) hugs Jan xx

Arthur Vaso

Date: 3/26/2017 3:51:00 PM

I love the raw emotion of this, oh we have all been there at least once! :)