8 Word Challenge 7 Poetry Contest

Fallacious gossip idle talk
Soggy crackling on the Sunday roasted pork

Plunge me into an inspiral Vortex 
Without a point or cortex 

Scarlet letter's 
Like love withered curt roses
Dance behind the misty tree's of palace courtyards

Bewilder me with remorse 

Why?

Doth my Curiosity get the best of me?

The Totality of it all

Eviscerate this septic wound of failing marriage 
Curiosity has rendered my cat dead

Tantalize me with 
8 short well versed words

That speak to me
Like Bird song before early morning dawn's 

As life carries on regardless 


For John Hamilton's 
8 word challenge - 7 poetry contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gentry Avatar
July 13, 2018 at 6:42 PM
Excellent use of the words, fit right into this interesting poem. Not an easy one. :)
Flaherty Avatar
July 13, 2018 at 8:06 PM
Cheers Susan. Thanks for your response and reply much appreciated . Not an easy 1 I know I seldom find my writes easy either you are not the only 1. Ta
Allison Avatar
June 24, 2018 at 4:41 PM
You wove the words in brilliantly Chris i love the curiosity line rendering the cat dead :-) hugs Jan xx
Flaherty Avatar
June 24, 2018 at 4:58 PM
Please enter this contest Jan I would like to read your version or interpretation of this. Hugs right back at you
Flaherty Avatar
June 24, 2018 at 4:51 PM
I have changed updated or made improvement to it . I hope????
Flaherty Avatar
June 24, 2018 at 4:49 PM
Cheers Jan are you or have you entered in this contest? I love a Challenge and wanted you to read it but you beat me to the punch. I must say I like this 1 myself . Cheers Jan ta.
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