8 Second Ride

Up before dawn, his feet hit the floor
He can't pretend to sleep anymore

His clothes displayed neatly, beside his bed
He places his hat atop his head

Today is the day he will pay off his debts
He won't return home with any regrets

The first to arrive, empty stands
Soon to be filled with clapping hands

In the blink of an eye, the parking overflows
With tickets in hand they fill in the rows 

A couple of clowns to fill in the gap
An impatient bunch, he can hear their feet tap

Alone in a stable with his hat on his chest
He prays to The Lord, that he will do his best

Peaks around the corner for a glimpse of his opponent
An unstable beast and he has to tone it

Brushes off the doubt and dusts his boots
Exposes himself, "Yeehaw", he hoots

Ready to go, signed the waiver
Cards seem to be playing in his favor

While riding him bare
A split second scare

He regains control
At the delight of his soul

Held steady till the crowd cried
Landed on two feet.  It was an 8 second ride

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 4/8/2015 6:03:00 PM
Great write! really enjoyed reading thru! ~Lizzy xo
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Date: 4/8/2015 8:18:00 AM
I really enjoyed this, I like how original it is.. I've never read a poem about riding a bull. Love it!
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Date: 3/30/2015 8:56:00 AM
Very good, another wonderful write, wanting more. Blessings and a 7
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