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88 Syllables

Dallas beckons yonder Bright lights and cold beer Cowboys always wander To things that ain't here Dallas collects money From those who can't spare Tragic becomes funny Just from bein' there Romance seldom follows Trips to our Big D Female rarely swallows Lines from guys like me Success follows tryin' Mabel is her name Confessed constant lyin' Loves me just the same 2/16/18 For Joseph Mays' contest 88 Syllables

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Date: 4/9/2018 7:57:00 PM
Well done, Larry. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 3/15/2018 10:33:00 PM
Wonderful imagery in your poem, Larry, and written very well. Congratulations on your win! Hugs ~`*
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 3/15/2018 10:36:00 PM
Thank you, Eve. Always nice to hear from you!!
Date: 3/15/2018 9:56:00 PM
Great stuff! Love the original take on the theme, and the football venue, (I am editor for a famous sports blog). Blessings and congratulations on your wonderful win, Larry - keep up the great work, my friend! :-)
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 3/15/2018 10:07:00 PM
Thank you kindly, Gregory! I'm going to search for your blog....
Date: 3/14/2018 6:57:00 PM
Your poem left me smiling Larry! I loved the humor in your last two stanzas. Congratulations on your wonderful win! : )
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 3/15/2018 10:06:00 PM
Thanks, Connie...I do write for a smile and I'm honored that I got one from you.!!
Date: 2/17/2018 4:08:00 PM
I like the rhythm and flow of your poem...and the message rings true...All the best
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 2/18/2018 9:44:00 AM
Thank you, Arturo!
Date: 2/17/2018 8:01:00 AM
Everyone needs a Mabel. Adorable little poem. Well done, Larry.
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 2/17/2018 8:40:00 AM
You are right absolutely..LOL..thank you!

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