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Celebration of the day Dad was born with a smile we treasure. We treasure it more today than yesterday. Mom lifted up his lips, a merry carousel, that circled round and round for sixty years. Dad found his smile when he found that special “she.” At dinner table, his dad had asked, “What are your intentions, son?” Dad said, “I love her, Dad!” Settled, no more was asked. That warm ignite was just beginning. Now us kids pull the strings that lift up the corners of Dad’s lips. We linger at stories, let him express, and never suppress his love for mom. Today we celebrate with pizza, beef on weck, a Bill’s game, with chocolate cake and presents, lingering in Dad’s presence and knowing surely Mom is in the room. We hope Mom is in the room. She’ll be smiling and dabbing tears. Happy Birthday, Dad! We are thankful for all these years! 9/12/2021

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Date: 9/13/2021 5:29:00 AM
A contemporary Kim,to me age wise.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/13/2021 8:31:00 AM
Thank you, Brian.
Date: 9/13/2021 2:07:00 AM
Aww how sweet.. Happy birthday to you dad.. a lovely tribute and day.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/13/2021 3:56:00 AM
Thank you. He was glad his kids were there but the day was rough and likely Wednesday will be the hardest because it is mom’s birthday. Thank you for your sentiments! I appreciate it! Good to see you on here too! <3
Date: 9/12/2021 10:41:00 AM
It's a pleasure to read this truly beautiful tribute, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/13/2021 3:56:00 AM
Thank you, Evelyn!
Date: 9/12/2021 8:57:00 AM
Wonderful and touching tribute, Kim
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/13/2021 3:56:00 AM
Thanks, Subimal!
Date: 9/12/2021 7:04:00 AM
This is oh so special Kim, love the sincerity and the poetry.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/13/2021 3:57:00 AM
Thank you so much, Harry!
Date: 9/12/2021 6:13:00 AM
Beautiful tribute to your father Kim, I'm sure Mom will be looking down. Hope he has a wonderful day. Tom
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/13/2021 3:57:00 AM
Was a very tough day but we were there for him. God bless and thank you, Tom!
Date: 9/12/2021 6:08:00 AM
What a lovely tribute to your father. And you do well to care for him. As for your mother, she is in heaven, smiling to see everybody happy. Hugs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/13/2021 3:58:00 AM
xoxo thank you, Victor. I know your sentiments come from deep within your heart.

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