84 Years

Celebration of the day Dad was born
with a smile we treasure. We treasure
it more today than yesterday. Mom
lifted up his lips, a merry carousel,
that circled round and round
for sixty years. Dad found his smile
when he found that special “she.”

At dinner table, his dad had asked,
“What are your intentions, son?”
Dad said, “I love her, Dad!” Settled,
no more was asked. That warm ignite

was just beginning. Now us kids
pull the strings that lift up the corners
of Dad’s lips. We linger at stories,
let him express, and never suppress 
his love for mom. Today we celebrate

with pizza, beef on weck, a Bill’s game,
with chocolate cake and presents,
lingering in Dad’s presence
and knowing surely Mom is in the room.
We hope Mom is in the room.
She’ll be smiling and dabbing tears.

Happy Birthday, Dad!
We are thankful
for all these years!

9/12/2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Strand Avatar
September 13, 2021 at 5:29 AM
A contemporary Kim,to me age wise.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 13, 2021 at 8:31 AM
Thank you, Brian.
One Avatar
September 13, 2021 at 2:07 AM
Aww how sweet.. Happy birthday to you dad.. a lovely tribute and day.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 13, 2021 at 3:56 AM
Thank you. He was glad his kids were there but the day was rough and likely Wednesday will be the hardest because it is mom’s birthday. Thank you for your sentiments! I appreciate it! Good to see you on here too! <3
Buehler Avatar
September 12, 2021 at 10:41 AM
It's a pleasure to read this truly beautiful tribute, Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 13, 2021 at 3:56 AM
Thank you, Evelyn!
Sinha-Roy Avatar
September 12, 2021 at 8:57 AM
Wonderful and touching tribute, Kim
Rodrigues Avatar
September 13, 2021 at 3:56 AM
Thanks, Subimal!
Horsman Avatar
September 12, 2021 at 7:04 AM
This is oh so special Kim, love the sincerity and the poetry.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 13, 2021 at 3:57 AM
Thank you so much, Harry!
Cunningham Avatar
September 12, 2021 at 6:13 AM
Beautiful tribute to your father Kim, I'm sure Mom will be looking down. Hope he has a wonderful day. Tom
Rodrigues Avatar
September 13, 2021 at 3:57 AM
Was a very tough day but we were there for him. God bless and thank you, Tom!
Buhagiar Avatar
September 12, 2021 at 6:08 AM
What a lovely tribute to your father. And you do well to care for him. As for your mother, she is in heaven, smiling to see everybody happy. Hugs
Rodrigues Avatar
September 13, 2021 at 3:58 AM
xoxo thank you, Victor. I know your sentiments come from deep within your heart.
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