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75 Words Close by relation and Distant by miles Distance, dissonance descending Deeper delivering doubt that Seeps like a teabag you steep Is the mountain as you stumble Dirt crumbles under your feet Is the measurement of How far you fall when You won’t see the hand waiting To catch you because Hidden truth is the same color As a lie in wait For words spoken In a voice you have yet to create Time for Change. ?????~ Susan Laine

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Date: 1/25/2015 4:54:00 AM
Wow! Very sad and powerful pen Susan! Very deep write dear friend. Best to you! :) Love and hugs! xxxxxx D. ^O^
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Susan Laine
Date: 1/25/2015 4:57:00 AM
Thank you, Dorian.

Book: Shattered Sighs