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74 Seconds

~~This poem contains 74 syllables~~enjoy!! The sun rays caresses my eyesight If I… had an interview with the sun, Would it last about 74 seconds? Will it count as an eloquent conversation? Why does the sun have so many layers? If I… could have a vacation in space, Many things would catch my eye – the sun Would make me BLIND!

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/3/2013 8:42:00 PM

I really enjoyed the poem... David,,, we are blind as it is.... love the poem.... always~ Linda

Donna Jones

Date: 5/3/2013 6:35:00 PM

It would certainly be some conversation.....have you..entered any of the contests by members???? If not you really should...it's fun and would get your poetry seen far and wide as it should be....great weekend to ya..